in the moment

By shortandpretentious

that's all you're good for now is
smile tongue in mouth
don't talk just touch & later
if there's time we'll reminisce
about days when you
meant something to me.

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Copyright 2004 shortandpretentious
Published on Sunday, November 7, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Sunday, January 27, 2019, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    So much pain beautifully honed into a tight piece of poetry.

  • worm On Friday, July 21, 2017, worm (1149)By person wrote:

    nicely put...

  • squench On Saturday, December 3, 2005, squench (5)By person wrote:

    i love this poem coz its leaping out to me in flames and leaving me with the winter chills. how i feel for...is what u have sketched in words. thanks!

  • xserratedsoulx On Friday, November 4, 2005, xserratedsoulx (212)By person wrote:

    that's brutal. ~lauren~

  • Lynaes On Wednesday, February 9, 2005, Lynaes (854)By person wrote:

    I'm sorry I'm going to have to say it again, ouch.. this screams at me. Brutally. perfectly worded..

  • Angst Queen On Monday, November 8, 2004, Angst Queen (370)By person wrote:

    shot down is the feeling i get from this one, nice

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