Comments by All Members
- "i loved the metaphor here, really clever, stirred a lot of thoughts in me, and the last verse adds yet another perspective, again im awed by the cleverness here"
Posted by Anth on "Blue Eyed Porcelain" by Mistress Morbid
- "i actually found this to be so positive , i love the elation of the words and the nature of the flow here,i really enjoyed this work"
Posted by Anth on "Deep Six Elated" by Mistress Morbid
- "ah... this takes me back to the old school yard! as for the slave thing... get used to it! the more things change, the more they stay the same... excellent!"
Posted by worm on "Monotonous Cycle" by Mistress Morbid
- "your poems are always so beautiful and each time the ending just puts it into another perspective,stunning"
Posted by Anth on "Tranquil Skys" by Mistress Morbid
- "you really painted an everyday scene so perfectly,abd then contrasted it with the clever last line that put it into perspective, calming thoughtful and enjoyable, superb work and the title gives it more meaning still"
Posted by Anth on "Monotonous Cycle" by Mistress Morbid
- "i was drawn in by this one. it had a mysterious force. broken rationale. but you have a reason for it. i dont know if you see what i mean...this was awesome however..."
Posted by Twilight on "And the night lives on" by Mistress Morbid
- "You paint a picture of inherent pathos, using a dramatists tools as if you were born with them...Mislead the reader, make them think of happier thoughts and then the fall will be that much worse...that much more confronting...Par excellence "
Posted by Solace on "And the night lives on" by Mistress Morbid
- "That was beautiful...the ending was great, I didn't even see it coming. I had this whole picture painted in my mind and it completely altered with that last line. Fabulous *~seraph~*"
Posted by Seraphic on "And the night lives on" by Mistress Morbid
- "...ooh...I like, I like...where did this one come from...? very lovely style; I almost felt sorry for the victim, but I was too excited to see the death too much...lol -Darun"
Posted by SilentStalker on "Blue Eyed Porcelain" by Mistress Morbid
- "Oh my, this was so dark and sinister.. I could see it all, so scary! I loved the colours, it really added to this tension.. Amazing work morb! :D ~L"
Posted by Lynaes on "Blue Eyed Porcelain" by Mistress Morbid
- "Hmm, this one is kind of tricky. Im not sure what i gathered from this.. Several different things i suppose .. both are a liitle to discriptive to share, but at any rate. wonderful write. [D&A] "
Posted by DoctorAsh on "Blue Eyed Porcelain" by Mistress Morbid
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