Monotonous Cycle
By Mistress Morbid
A rest area scattered with
college students
- eating -
- conversing -
- laughing -
I sit alone, cigarette smoke assaulting my nose
- nauseating -
The sun is out, beating down rays of heat
equalized by gusts of wind
A little man made pond with fountains
gushing into the air
random papers floating in it
from students losing their assignments
- soaked -
- bleeding -
- black and blue -
A faint bell can be heard
as students make their way to class
for another long two hours of enslavement
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Copyright 2004 Morbid Derangement
Published on Thursday, May 20, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Friday, April 15, 2005, Kinkypoptart
(555) wrote:
this is my life... every goddamn day... except im still in highschool... which i think in some ways is worse. good write ~*~Tart~*~
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On Saturday, May 22, 2004, Alacer_Cogitatus
(140) wrote:
heh. college. what a life. nicely written A_C
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On Thursday, May 20, 2004, murder_in_clubland
(384) wrote:
Very Very nice i like this alot its gorgeous....saddening~ss
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On Thursday, May 20, 2004, worm
(1149) wrote:
ah... this takes me back to the old school yard! as for the slave thing... get used to it! the more things change, the more they stay the same... excellent!
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On Thursday, May 20, 2004, Anth
(1126) wrote:
you really painted an everyday scene so perfectly,abd then contrasted it with the clever last line that put it into perspective, calming thoughtful and enjoyable, superb work and the title gives it more meaning still