Monotonous Cycle

By Mistress Morbid

A rest area scattered with
college students
- eating -
- conversing -
- laughing -

I sit alone, cigarette smoke assaulting my nose
- nauseating -

The sun is out, beating down rays of heat
equalized by gusts of wind

A little man made pond with fountains
gushing into the air
random papers floating in it
from students losing their assignments
- soaked -
- bleeding -
- black and blue -

A faint bell can be heard
as students make their way to class
for another long two hours of enslavement

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Copyright 2004 Morbid Derangement
Published on Thursday, May 20, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Kinkypoptart On Friday, April 15, 2005, Kinkypoptart (555)By person wrote:

    this is my life... every goddamn day... except im still in highschool... which i think in some ways is worse. good write ~*~Tart~*~

  • Alacer_Cogitatus On Saturday, May 22, 2004, Alacer_Cogitatus (140)By person wrote:

    heh. college. what a life. nicely written A_C

  • murder_in_clubland On Thursday, May 20, 2004, murder_in_clubland (384)By person wrote:

    Very Very nice i like this alot its gorgeous....saddening~ss

  • worm On Thursday, May 20, 2004, worm (1149)By person wrote:

    ah... this takes me back to the old school yard! as for the slave thing... get used to it! the more things change, the more they stay the same... excellent!

  • Anth On Thursday, May 20, 2004, Anth (1126)By person wrote:

    you really painted an everyday scene so perfectly,abd then contrasted it with the clever last line that put it into perspective, calming thoughtful and enjoyable, superb work and the title gives it more meaning still

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