Help Denied

By Mistress Morbid

A helping hand * presented

taken * with greed and deceit

over and over * taken * mistreated

misused * abused and beaten to the floor

These two hands wrap their
slender fingers around your neck

Can you feel the hatred burning inside?

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Published on Wednesday, May 19, 2004. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Help Denied"

On Saturday, May 22, 2004, Anth (1126) wrote:

short but powerful, i like the contrasting image of the kind of bite the hand that feeds you or the giving hand can take all back am i making sense lol?, its another great work from you
On Wednesday, May 19, 2004, Liath (35) wrote:
On Thursday, May 20, 2004, Mistress Morbid (405) wrote:

Lost?
On Wednesday, May 19, 2004, murder_in_clubland (384) wrote:

I really liekt his..its interesting and random i hope to read more of your works sopoon~ss
On Wednesday, May 19, 2004, sixsixnine (476) wrote:

liked this piece it it's short but thought provocative* great work*669*
On Wednesday, May 19, 2004, Drifter (265) wrote:

The only excuse for betrayal is love - the only result hatred. Powerful work.