Tranquil Skys

By Mistress Morbid

Unicorns dancing in the moonlight
Their horns kissing the sky
The faeries sit on leaves of trees
Telling idle tales to one another
Everything shimmers in the
Light of the moon
Making everything look
Like a lost enchanting palace
The elvish nation in a deep slumber
Looks so peaceful

Oh how I wish I could join them

Suddenly white glistening
Snow flakes float through the air
Slowly descending to the ground

Then I set the snow globe down

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Copyright 2004 Morbid Derangement
Published on Saturday, March 6, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I like your style of writing

  • Anth On Thursday, May 20, 2004, Anth (1126)By person wrote:

    your poems are always so beautiful and each time the ending just puts it into another perspective,stunning

  • Solace On Wednesday, April 21, 2004, Solace (1065)By person wrote:

    Often have i dreamed of being taken away into the realms of the danaan, the faery folk...My dream is one in which we no longer need to dream of a perfect place for we are already there...I would go on but too much to say in such small space :)

  • A former member wrote: Such a lovely description of the scene, created some beautiful images. And what a pretty ending! Stunning writing. ~Wish Upon A Star

  • Mistress Morbid On Thursday, March 11, 2004, Mistress Morbid (405)By person wrote:

    Thank you, I had a snow globe in mind because its something you can touch, and then dream on about.

  • Stranger On Tuesday, March 9, 2004, Stranger (263)By person wrote:

    Vividly it flows from colorful fantasy to hardened reality. Like the sadness of waking from a dream that you wish had been real.

  • A former member wrote: amazing, so tranquil, i can see it being painted before my very eyes. andria

  • Mistress Morbid On Saturday, March 6, 2004, Mistress Morbid (405)By person wrote:

    Im amazed by your comments, thank you so much.

  • Lynaes On Saturday, March 6, 2004, Lynaes (854)By person wrote:

    My god this is so beautiful! And what a gorgeous twist, I love this piece. Excellent work. ~L

  • hopeless On Saturday, March 6, 2004, hopeless (51)By person wrote:

    awwww that was cool..... nice grab back to reality.. it was so vivid... i really enjoyed this piece... ~hopeless

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