Comments by All Members
- "This is a strongly expressive piece but so very saddening to read. I agree with abattoir..cut off their balls. But I'd include their dicks as well. "
Posted by Unknown on "It's our little secret" by innocence
- "Haha that's funny. I am very much a woman, but can't say that is the first time I've ever heard a guy say that to me. I'm a free thinker and I suppose in a way I rebel against following the herd. Thank you for the comments."
Posted by innocence on "Ambivalence" by innocence
- "your sex is a mystery, but if your a chick, i want to make you mine! your a fuckin' rebel and thats an awesome quality, as long as its controlled chaos! lol. nice write, i really liked it and sorry some ass made you feel this way. write on!"
Posted by haunted on "Ambivalence" by innocence
- "Fascinating write re-posing the same question that begs an answer. Enjoyed the feeling in this piece, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "How many times" by innocence
- "Is this a paen to a dime bag perhaps? I haven't heard that term for a while, but I'm probably wrong. If this was about you personally, then you are almost certainly better off without him - guessing the confusion might be intentional, thanks!"
Posted by dwells on "Hey You" by innocence
- "Hey you, nice write thanks for the ride. I am glad you see that the sea is plenty and rich. Well done!"
Posted by lordbongo on "Hey You" by innocence
- "One dimensional people can really grate, I always say "do what you want not what someone tells you you want" There are way to many dictators in this world trying to arrange other peoples lives and minds. I like to give them a swift kick....... Nicely penned, keep being you.... "
Posted by Magdalena on "My life's Ballet" by innocence
- "thank you so much for the comments, and very well put about the whole untrue love representing all true love, I need to keep this in mind for sure"
Posted by innocence on "BlackHeart" by innocence
- "I absolutely love this. You wrote the poem I've always held inside. Truly, speechless. I felt just like you."
Posted by Unknown on "My life's Ballet" by innocence
- "hmm, very nice poem, you sound broken, dont let love that cant be true, represent all true love. youll find it. thanks for sharing!"
Posted by haunted on "BlackHeart" by innocence
- "very nice, its packed with emotion. and those always make the best poems. great job!"
Posted by haunted on "kidd" by innocence
- "Yes, yes, yes. Glad to see there have been people out there to feel how I feel. Expressed wonderfully."
Posted by wilted on "Make Sense" by innocence
- "First stanza has really cool structure, but the second one is actually easier to read and more descriptive. Love the repetition, but you might want to check 8th line from the bottom, "works" or words?"
Posted by Liz on "It's our little secret" by innocence
- "happens more than most know...becuase they keep it a secret...no one deserves that...the only one who deserves anything is the guy to have his balls cut off...bastards...its all but happened to me...involved in my life too much...meaningful write...JBC"
Posted by FlashDark on "It's our little secret" by innocence
- "-claps- bravo i love it -bows to you- (btw the quote in your profile from the song mad world is awesome i love that song)"
Posted by Unknown on "Not because I should" by innocence
- "This is a very powerful poem, with a very good flow to it. Though some parts don't flow as well as others, the entire effect is very well done. Good job... ~ Kali Ma "
Posted by Kali Ma on "Anger control" by innocence
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