Comments by All Members
- "Wow!!! A great read! Poems are at times repetitive and redundant but not this one! It's creatively written and has a great flow!
Thanks for sharing "
Posted by Unknown on "Silently I Sit" by Bittersweet Life
- "Thanks guys/gal's, your opinions truly mean a lot to me and encourage me to keep writing. Yeah it's a pretty tough situation but I'm doing okay with it. I just hate having to pretend that we never existed. She can do that, but I won't. Sorry to hear about your situation man, they always give bullshit reasons but if they want to leave then we shouldn't stop them, we'll be better off with someone that wants us around. "
Posted by Bittersweet Life on "A Memory" by Bittersweet Life
- "Hey, man, I've been there. You feel like you want to die for a few months and then, hopefully, someone or something pulls you out of it... I don't normally like to leave pity comments (since I don't like getting them on my poems) but this piece hits pretty close to home and I felt like what I had to say might help. Also, this poem is really well penned. Very evocative; it's obvious this is coming from a place of real passion."
Posted by Queazenart on "A Memory" by Bittersweet Life
- "This was so bitter sweet to read and painfully romantic. But it is obvious you still have strong feelings for her. Beautiful write!"
Posted by Unknown on "A Memory" by Bittersweet Life
- "Short poems are good because I'm lazy and don't want to read too much :D... On a serious note, though, this is a nice, concise read. It's like the depressive poetic equivalent of a granola bar, and I love granola bars. I'll be sure to look through your back-catalog of poems now that I've read this."
Posted by Queazenart on "A Raven in the Rain" by Bittersweet Life
- ""Technological advancement, natures demise" This line really gets me, I like the meaning you have here and the way you come about it with so little words, it has a depth, a brilliant write~ Perfectly worded, keep it up! :)"
Posted by Symbol on "The Unseen Beauty" by Bittersweet Life
- "I know this feeling and ive asked these questions many times.... Hang in there and you'll realize your worth, the answers will come to you. "
Posted by MissAngelic on "I don't know" by Bittersweet Life
- "I was raised by my father, he came home with my brother, to find me and my sister unconscious on the floor. She fed us both anti depressants on a spoon with jam and ice cream. Her being 2 years older, she wasn't affected as badly. I had to go to hospital and when my father saw me with tubes sticking out of everywhere (bear in mind I was only 1 or so) he knew he had to leave her for our safety. I found all this out by overhearing a conversation when I was 16, till then I had no knowledge of why they divorced. "
Posted by Bittersweet Life on "There is one who I have known not" by Bittersweet Life
- "You're not the only only. Some people close their eyes because they can't handle what they'd see... I see pain, hurt, broken and torn people, ignorance and selfishness, revenge seekers seasoned with bitterness, liars and haters.... With a small minority of genuine. Welcome to DarkPoetry"
Posted by MissAngelic on "The Only One" by Bittersweet Life
- "Awesome write i read it over a couple of times , very philosophical, and gave me something to think about for the day. Thanks for sharing."
Posted by Unknown on "In The Darkness" by Bittersweet Life
- "While I was reading this I was reminded of The Raven by Edgar Allen Poe. It appears as though this reflects a spiral downward into insanity. Interesting. Nice write."
Posted by Rowan on "In The Darkness" by Bittersweet Life
