In The Darkness
By Bittersweet Life
Thinking, thinking, in the darkness
Lonesome, loathsome, sleep evading
Mind is blurring, stirring, in the darkness
Yearning, turning,
thoughts disastrous
Eyes are dreary, weary, sore and burning
My brain befuddled, muddled, deprived of rest
A voice calls hither,
"Why art thou in darkness?"
The voice was near, clear, in the darkness
My mouth replied, 'fore i realized
"Why should i not be?" said
I
Not seeing the speaker, The Reaper, perhaps, I thought
The
speaker spoke, my mind awoke, and I cast a light across the empty room
For empty it was, I was alone, as I had known
The speaker was
but my imagination
My mind alert, my pupils burnt, I pondered the
speakers' words
For they were not my own
"Darkness is but
the end of all things, do not linger there more than you must, it is
cold, and full of loneliness, and you will have more than you can bear,
when the time comes."
Perhaps it was The Reaper, the speaker
Lured by my weakened will and wicked thoughts
"When the time
comes." Echoes in my mind, and I smile
I empty the room of light,
and settle back into the darkness, thinking, thinking
Author's Note:
Had just read some Poe, and decided to write thisComments on "In The Darkness"
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A former member wrote:
would love to read more of your works, very thought provoking, philosophical...love ALL your work
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On Friday, February 22, 2013, Bittersweet Life
(6) wrote:
Thanks heaps guys, I'm glad to see some people actually liked it, I wrote it the other day and only just joined this site, definitely gonna keep posting :)
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A former member wrote:
Awesome write i read it over a couple of times , very philosophical, and gave me something to think about for the day. Thanks for sharing.
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A former member wrote:
I agree, this totally made me think of Poe.
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On Thursday, February 21, 2013, Rowan
(197) wrote:
While I was reading this I was reminded of The Raven by Edgar Allen Poe. It appears as though this reflects a spiral downward into insanity. Interesting. Nice write.