Comments by All Members
- ""All these pills fill me with numbness". I have been living this line for the past few weeks. I think I enjoy the feeling a little too much.....Excellent write."
Posted by Lost_Soul on "Another patient" by unusual_blood
- "i may not know what im talkin about(i dont know you you see) but it looks like you may have a talent for lyrics(i know, im crazy, but i read it a couple times.. it seemed to fit with music....)"
Posted by Unknown on "Another patient" by unusual_blood
- ""But now all that once was familiar
has turned blank".....Beautiful Line. gorgeous work here...i love it! - Methos"
Posted by Methos on "Another patient" by unusual_blood
- "This is really great and it captures a train of thought very well. It really stands out as something realistic, yet special. ~Wish Upon A Star"
Posted by Unknown on "Stupid Girl" by unusual_blood
- ""merry go round" feeling, the slightly out of control, spinning wildly feeling . . it was more of an experience than something simply read. Really, really nice write here. Good job."
Posted by cre on "Merry-Go-Round" by unusual_blood
- "I really like this . . at first when I was reading it I was thinking it could have been broken down into more than one poem because of the way it seems to change structure and point . . but I soon realize this really just adds to the whole "merry go roun"
Posted by cre on "Merry-Go-Round" by unusual_blood
- "I agree with Ended...you have a great writing style and I can't wait until you become a full memeber so you can post more of you works...grate job**jwd**"
Posted by Petrified Wood on "A sip of Vodka" by unusual_blood
- "awesome write!!!! Made me feel sad, and unfortunatley,guilty. I have been that guy, and made the biggest mistake of my life......Glad I cahanged*whew* anyway, great poem, keep it up........Bloth"
Posted by SGT Bloth on "Stupid Girl" by unusual_blood
- "So many different thoughts and concepts, I love how you've pulled them together. It's unrefined, it's raw, it's life, and I love it."
Posted by crazyflax on "Inspiration" by unusual_blood
- "The lines where you talked about how you would just keep going, the lines about the boat and such, I really loved them. I can totally see this as a song and I hope one day you'd sing it for us all."
Posted by crazyflax on "Merry-Go-Round" by unusual_blood
- "Like tainted_letters, I also can't see how you could ever be a stupid girl. The idiot is whoever avoided you and made you feel that way. I say we kick his ass."
Posted by crazyflax on "Stupid Girl" by unusual_blood
- "this was indeed a extremely cool poem. I can relate to this so well... I jumped off the merry go round a few years back but I find myself sucked back on.... great great great stuff. :::OLd"
Posted by OLd SouL on "Merry-Go-Round" by unusual_blood
- "Beautiful work!! You've got alot of talent, i can see the pain and fustration in this work, i can feel your anger.....marvelous work. -Methos"
Posted by Methos on "Merry-Go-Round" by unusual_blood
- "This is an extreamly fucking cool poem. I can definetly see this as a musical peice, or even a dark, wispered chant. *begins to wisper it over and over* This merry-go-round needs to stop right now ...
This merry-go-round needs to stop right now"
Posted by Raze Drake on "Merry-Go-Round" by unusual_blood
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