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  • "good piece on a serious topic.i like your description of what i assume are the soldiers as "souls filled with bones" something about that reveals a fragility to me. thank you for the write, welcome to dp"
    Posted by spikedwithLUST on "The Great War" by Melancholic VIncent
  • "thanks for your comment. all the treasures of kings cannot remove a rage that festers within. where does the tortured mind find solace? thanks for sharing, best of luck to you."
    Posted by The Dybbuk on "Next of Kin" by Melancholic VIncent
  • "Well, that makes sense since Spain is right next to Portugal, they are "nuestros hermanos", in the 16th century Portugal went to Brazil and Spain to Mexico, Colombia, and so on. But i do like better european portuguese than brazilian portuguese. Spanish is a fine language too, i had lessons in high school"
    Posted by Melancholic VIncent on "Lacerating Rage" by Melancholic VIncent
  • "Very much like Spanish, the most beautiful language of love, and most translates easily, but when my sister lived in Rio - the maid nevee spoke to me when I called for some reason, even on her cumpleanos! Cheers Mel."
    Posted by dwells on "Lacerating Rage" by Melancholic VIncent
  • "I guess we can getting addicted to all chemicals, even the ones produced by our body. But there's always treatment for all kinds of addictions if it causes problems in our life. I have my ones addictions too. Not drugs, nor alcohol, nor smoking, more subtile forms of addictions"
    Posted by Melancholic VIncent on "Single-Bullet Theory" by Melancholic VIncent
  • "The idea of a mechanism with many cogwheels can also resemble the inevitability of certain events, the solid matter of metals gives them a ruthless temper and resembles the human lack of power to change the tragic things in life, to stop time and death, we get crushed trying to prevent something that we are powerless and are punished to try it. Feels like the ruthless power of fate, or trying to change something that is of God's will."
    Posted by Melancholic VIncent on "Midnight alignment" by Melancholic VIncent
  • "I guess i never had the real suicide tendencies, but i used my empathy to know how would it be. My opinion on the subject is that these tendences that one can feel, like in many things, is when someone feels obsessed with this idea, have a hard time controling his impulses and have a misguided will to end a depressive state. Everyone is different and it would be arrogant for me to say that i know how every one feels, but i guess someone is blinded by a deep agony state and can't see beyond it, someone loses his rationality because they are smothered by these feelings and just want it to end it somehow and chose the worst way. I think suicide is an act of selfishness."
    Posted by Melancholic VIncent on "Single-Bullet Theory" by Melancholic VIncent
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