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Lacerating Rage
By Melancholic VIncent
Denied desires
Ardent will
Quiet screams
Lights up fury
Pure Lemon
Burns and bitters
Corrodes it all
Sharp dagger
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Portuguese original text
following:
Raiva Lacerante
Desejos negados
Vontade ardente
Gritos calados
Fúria se acende
Limão puro
Queima e amarga
Corrói tudo
Afiada adaga
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Copyright 2012 Melancholic VIncent
Published on Tuesday, June 12, 2012.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Lacerating Rage"
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A former member wrote:
I like it ^^ its like, that acidic, gnawing, bitter feeling that one gets when he doesnt get what he wants and is all like "AARGH"
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On Monday, December 30, 2013, Melancholic VIncent
(429)
wrote:
It's kinda that :P
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On Wednesday, June 13, 2012, FadedBlues
(2168) wrote:
...nice style. small puzzle pieces that link together to create a dramatic scene...
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On Wednesday, June 13, 2012, Melancholic VIncent
(429) wrote:
Thanks! It's about rage felt when our desires are denied, small poems maybe attract people because they are easier to read
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On Tuesday, June 12, 2012, dwells
(4284) wrote:
Very much like Spanish, the most beautiful language of love, and most translates easily, but when my sister lived in Rio - the maid nevee spoke to me when I called for some reason, even on her cumpleanos! Cheers Mel.
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On Wednesday, June 13, 2012, Melancholic VIncent
(429) wrote:
Well, that makes sense since Spain is right next to Portugal, they are "nuestros hermanos", in the 16th century Portugal went to Brazil and Spain to Mexico, Colombia, and so on. But i do like better european portuguese than brazilian portuguese. Spanish is a fine language too, i had lessons in high school
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On Friday, June 15, 2012, dwells
(4284) wrote:
I had Spanish all 4 years in Hialeah High School, it was a survival skill in Miami, cheers!
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On Friday, June 15, 2012, Melancholic VIncent
(429) wrote:
I'm better at english, a little of german and spanish. I like the american spanish very much, it's diferent. I would like to study all kinds of languages, but i live in a small town with not much resources.
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