Crimson Blood
By Melancholic VIncent
Blood is thick as crimson
Of the sanguinare he mocks
There's
no worst sentence that awaits him
But the indubitable certainty
That Hades will come
To feed on hands
Bathed in purple-red
In a river of ardent lava
Creeping slowly
Devouring impenitent
sinners
Downhill until the depths
Where lay impertinent tombs
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The initial text was made in Portuguese,
following is the original text.
Sangue de Escarlate
"O sangue é espesso como escarlate
Do sanguinário ele escarnece
Não há sentença pior que lhe espere
Se não a certeza indubitável
Que o Hades há-de surgir
Para se alimentar de mãos
Banhadas
em vermelho-púrpura
Num rio de lava ardente
Rastejando lentamente
Devora pecadores impenitentes
Colina abaixo ate ás profundezas
Onde jazem túmulos impertinentes"
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Copyright 2012 Melancholic VIncent
Comments on "Crimson Blood"
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On Thursday, July 12, 2018, Jonas Robinson
(848) wrote:
You are a great writer.
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A former member wrote:
Yeah...we all get punished when we do bad, bad stuff...half humanity could go to Hell/Hades/Gehenna/[INSERT RELIGION]. your imagery on this one was...different from what I'm used to from you...nonetheless i love it. you pull it off well
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A former member wrote:
this is an unusaul style. but you made it work. again i love this :D id become a fan... but i dont know how to do that XD
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On Monday, July 2, 2012, Melancholic VIncent
(428) wrote:
One more time, thanks! About the fan thing, go to my profile, and at the left side, there's some icon that says "bookmark this" or something like that
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On Wednesday, June 13, 2012, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
...this looks good. you took my advice...
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On Wednesday, June 13, 2012, Melancholic VIncent
(428) wrote:
Thanks! it's good to hear the compliments of an experience lifer
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On Monday, June 11, 2012, dwells
(4177) wrote:
So I'm guessing you are Brazilian maybe? Was the original text your own? Nicely done Mel!
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On Tuesday, June 12, 2012, Melancholic VIncent
(428) wrote:
Portuguese, from Portugal, in Europe. Yeah, the original text it's mine, you must be from the United States or something? Thanks! It's about punishment when we do something bad.