Comments by All Members
- "there's a fine line between comedy and tragedy ... I felt like I was walking a tightrope between the two...uniquely disturbing thoughts ... plasticized and self sanitized ... I hope this feeling passes quickly..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "Plastic Vomit Problems" by TornPieces
- ""We know eachother like old veins rupturing into bruises...."
That line was a revelation. I loved this. Like sandpaper on the cheek; never broken and always burning. "
Posted by MikeShank1989 on "Complicated Love" by TornPieces
- "Thank you, forgive me for it being so intense, i wrote it while I was having a flashback kinda. Sometimes I have to write about this over and over again, so I can get it out of me. Thank you for being my audience , your ears take the silence away "
Posted by TornPieces on "I think my Daddy broke me.." by TornPieces
- "This breaks my heart, it makes me want to castrate your dad. I struggle to cope with my abuse so i cant imagine how you'd ever deal with yours from a young age. Drop me a message if you ever need anything"
Posted by MissAngelic on "I think my Daddy broke me.." by TornPieces
- "I truly hate reading about this topic, but because my "daddy" broke me too & it's a sick, disgusting situation...that tends to scar us so deep. Writing about it when those triggers bring it to surface sometimes helps. Thanks for sharing.."
Posted by Deathkitten on "I think my Daddy broke me.." by TornPieces
- "I concur with ms brass below.... that line was a hard blow. I'm sorry, I don't comment much on such subjects. they just make me wanna mangle someone. blessings to you, as the sainted one would say."
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Once Upon a Dirty Dove" by TornPieces
- "Thank you so much for this comment.
I appreciate that it brought a message to you. It was very cathartic to write it "
Posted by TornPieces on "Shell of Lies" by TornPieces
- "WOW! This is unbelievably powerful on so many levels! The imagery brings heaviness to my heart while reading this. Utterly hard hitting!"
Posted by FearlessDragon on "Shell of Lies" by TornPieces
- "Best poem I've read for a while. It had a nice flow, and fit together very well."
Posted by Unknown on "Black" by TornPieces
- "Nice flowing, dark piece... I like it, its sad and deep and true. I also like black, i cant be seen in blackness"
Posted by MissAngelic on "Black" by TornPieces
- "nice poem a little darkness with just the right touch. and black is a very beautiful color to crawl into. black makes me feel im mourning everyday because I am, im mourning the loss of myself years ago. and ive never been happier to be on display as a beacon for the lost. awesome!"
Posted by haunted on "Black" by TornPieces
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