Comments by All Members
- "I got the creepy shivers from this. Death of a child is never a good thing, and especially in a school. The fact that these could have been the last thoughts of students in real life situations sends more chills down my spine... Something to ponder... Yes. "
Posted by Lux on "Didnt Get to Say Good-Bye Mommy " by Little_Zombie
- "I found something elusive about this poem. Something you're not saying. But I think that's what makes it interesting. I enjoyed the "Cut off my wings" part. It was like a double lock on a 12 inch locked concrete reinforced safe. You cut your wings off and threw away the key, just in case."
Posted by Lux on "Forgetting to Breath " by Little_Zombie
- "Can you imagine if this replaced that story... We would mortify some children. .laughs. Thank you for entertaining my thoughts a bit. I like you style."
Posted by soul_versing on "Jack and Jill" by Little_Zombie
- "Oooh... You have a similar mindset to mine, hmm... Quite pleasing. I love thay very thing that is saved in turn becomes disastrous. .pops a kiss to Little_Zombie. Bows, love."
Posted by soul_versing on "Ding Dong Bell" by Little_Zombie
- "my mom drags me to curch and for some reason when im next to holy water or the cross i feel like my soul is burning"
Posted by Unknown on "Am I a Psycho " by Little_Zombie
- "Hilarious. Poor Jack indeed! Ha ha ha. Is the lightening of the words deliberate? You're a master at structuring your work in inventive ways. Always a great read with you too. "
Posted by Dominic on "Jack and Jill" by Little_Zombie
- "brilliant, sounds JUST last the past weekend, which has pushed me into a complete breakdown... the drinking started fun, but turned ugly... like me."
Posted by dalphon on "thousand shots" by Little_Zombie
- "Sounds like bad smoke and dirty mirrors maybe, this was darkly depressing, hoping something comes to make you smile, really soon, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "smoke and mirrors" by Little_Zombie
- "This poem reminds me of a time when i was little playing out in the hose and i saw a rainbow and i was happy for a second until the sun went away and so did the rainbow"
Posted by Unknown on "Rainbow falling down" by Little_Zombie
- "Just morbidly amused with the zombie craze perhaps? Great shock value for the parents too! Cheers to you."
Posted by dwells on "Am I a Psycho " by Little_Zombie
- "What if this life is really heaven, then Hell would be infinitely worse maybe? Or perhaps the grass is always greener. Well-wrought work overall and darkly despairing, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "demonology " by Little_Zombie
- "reminds me a little of a movie I just watched called "The Devil Inside". it was about demonic possession. not bad..
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Posted by Patches on "demonology " by Little_Zombie
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