Jack and Jill

Jack and Jill went up the hill,

To fetch a pail of water;

Jack fell down, and broke his crown,

Oh poor jack you had to go up that hill

Now you have fallen for your death

Poor jill had to see

That pool of blood that flowed from your head

covering the ground slowly losing life from your eyes

Why did you go up that hill and forget to stay sure footed

Oh jack you silly boy now your dead

Oh well

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Published on Tuesday, March 13, 2012. Filed under: "Horror" and "Poetry"

I use some of the old story Jack and Jill

Comments on "Jack and Jill"

On Friday, July 21, 2017, worm (1149) wrote:

all righty, then!
On Tuesday, February 4, 2014, soul_versing (774) wrote:

Can you imagine if this replaced that story... We would mortify some children. .laughs. Thank you for entertaining my thoughts a bit. I like you style.
A former member wrote: Loved this...amazing=) Paints such a cool picture in my head and makes me smile.:)
A former member wrote: omg the best i love it
A former member wrote: the best thing I've read so far
On Monday, August 20, 2012, Dominic (53) wrote:

Hilarious. Poor Jack indeed! Ha ha ha. Is the lightening of the words deliberate? You're a master at structuring your work in inventive ways. Always a great read with you too.
A former member wrote: Poor Jack...true. Thanx 4 the comment and for this awesome poem.
On Tuesday, March 13, 2012, Devilish (2633) wrote:

Oh poor jack gave jill a pill and fuck her til she bled.. then jack got off jill got popped right into the back of her head.. Hello there and welcome to Darkpoetry.. i see you have roamed around and read and commented which is so vital to leading them back your way.. thank you for reading me i appreciate it .. if you eva need anything i'm a click away...