Comments by All Members
- "Alone indeed...we are....and far away from the lies and deceit of others, welcome to my world....very well done here........13"
Posted by 13sonsofgod on "ALONE" by Qwendragoness
- "I am glad to see that your writing received a long overdue recognition from the sites other poets. I would like to see more from my friend. Closer than most friends I have ever had.
In Darkness we find a Planeterization of a mystery we have brought ourselves to. Which way to shine a light in its gravity and history is a journey just for one. This was well spoken and with truthful words that bloom. I wonder what you found there. "
Posted by Silver Spectre on "ALONE" by Qwendragoness
- "I love this one; the imagery, and the raw portrayal on the well-known feeling to all; envy."
Posted by Unknown on "Envy" by Qwendragoness
- "if anyone says that they can not relate to this piece in some way that person is a fucking lier, you have ensnared the feeling of Envy and put it to pen and paper..."
Posted by Blood of Winter on "Envy" by Qwendragoness
- "much vivid imagery. "The fire consumes my still beating heart
Till the pain of hope
Has left my thoughts" is quite effective.~season
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Posted by suicideseason on "I Am Still" by Qwendragoness
- "I amglad you did not take this down as you said you would.It is a very good write and you brought to these words such emotion.~Silver~"
Posted by Silver Spectre on "Envy" by Qwendragoness
- "i like the last stanza. the first stanza i think i could be broken up a bit...the wordiness of it makes it loose it impact."
Posted by AshtrayDirt on "Envy" by Qwendragoness
- "Wow.. that was a good write, and I like how you cant help but use the word dragon. the ending make me feel like someone looking to the side as the kiss were made. did that make sense I dont know.. good write. Monkey"
Posted by Dancing_Monkey on "Envy" by Qwendragoness
- "writing seems to be improving. i dont know how you improve perfection though. ~Drea~"
Posted by Drea on "Goodbye" by Qwendragoness
- "hehe...btw...even if you don't have body art like this...It's would still make an awsome advocate for one of that culture."
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "Dragon" by Qwendragoness
- "Tatoo is the way of the future. A subculture with more depth and intellect then the prof. social psychologists give them credit for. You've so completly entrenched what body art can mean to a person in this. Absolutely fantastic. ~JMDW~"
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "Dragon" by Qwendragoness
- "Damned all the wonderful poets that hide in the grass blades. Where did you come from?! This is...is...stunning in its eloquence. You've inlayed the most tragic scene of life in this beautifully simple braid of rhythm and rhyme. ~JMDW~"
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "Facade" by Qwendragoness
- "Maybe what you see as light is due to the fact he has been in that world of dark hidden from sight and the comming through it has made his heart true than it was... would such a heart vanquish what is also coming through it?~Silver~"
Posted by Silver Spectre on "Fading" by Qwendragoness
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