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My Pit
By Qwendragoness
Basking in the warmth of a new heart found
My bliss is destroyed by a look in his eyes
It is not me in the reflection there
But the hope held for another
The light around me dims
As my pit of despair rises
I tried to love and have lost again
Before it was allowed to bloom
Back to my depths I resign
To lick my bleeding, aching wounds
This battlefield so harsh and so cold
Soon I will be able to fight no more
But in this pit I find some hope
As I look around it is his eyes that find me
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Copyright 2003 Qwendragoness
Published on Friday, October 10, 2003.
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"Poetry"
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On Monday, June 7, 2004, Blood of Winter
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wrote:
Your words have a life to themselves drawing a reader in with every little letter...
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On Sunday, October 12, 2003, CharlottesWeb
(509) wrote:
I can not relate...but I can feel as much as your words have touched me. Some how...I realized the hope and happiness...the abrupt dissapointment and then the pain of this story. Wonderfully written I think...~JMDW~
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A former member wrote:
Deep work. Beautiful to read.
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On Friday, October 10, 2003, Drea
(1388) wrote:
as silver knows this is a touchy subject for me. i can relate SO much. yet i have be the person with "that" look in my eyes. its a painful this for both ppl. yet the 3 person gets off the hook. ~Drea~
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On Friday, October 10, 2003, Qwendragoness
(12) wrote:
I do understand........I will try some brighter things
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A former member wrote:
very good! your wrting is starting to become one of my favs---brain
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