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Facade
By Qwendragoness
My mind has an eye that looks where it will
Around the tree, under the water and through the hill
All of this within my reach
I cannot master my power of speech
To explain my feelings would release my soul
I would be able to escape this spiraling hole
Yet, I hide behind wit and charm
Successfully removing my heart from my arm
But in the pits of my blackening heart
I would not know where to start
To reveal the depths within
Would disrupt and no one would win
My façade intact I go forth
Wondering what my life is worth
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Copyright 2003 Qwendragoness
Published on Friday, October 10, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Monday, June 7, 2004, Blood of Winter
(296)
wrote:
great flow of rhyme, I enjoyed the fast degredation of the feeling in this piece...
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On Sunday, October 19, 2003, CharlottesWeb
(511) wrote:
Damned all the wonderful poets that hide in the grass blades. Where did you come from?! This is...is...stunning in its eloquence. You've inlayed the most tragic scene of life in this beautifully simple braid of rhythm and rhyme. ~JMDW~
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On Friday, October 10, 2003, Silver Spectre
(90) wrote:
Ok..where have you been hiding these. That was awesome writing.~Silver~
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A former member wrote:
this is really good...nice writing and great visual words..i can relate to this im off to read more of yours =)---brain
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On Friday, October 10, 2003, Qwendragoness
(12) wrote:
All of these were on necrotic
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On Friday, October 10, 2003, Drea
(1443) wrote:
"To explain my feelings would release my soul" wow...if this work didnt capture my feelings at this very moment then..there is no hope for me.. lol. this is something that i can relate to so well. thank you for writing this ~Drea~
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On Sunday, October 12, 2003, Lydia Jade
(1350) wrote:
I have the strange feeling your gonna amount to alot more then i could ever be here at dp! ~Blood~
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