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ALONE
By Qwendragoness
I pull back into the mists of my mind
My heart sinks deep in my chest
Broken, shattered, attempting to heal
I resign that I do not want to feel
The scars of my wounds turn to bone
The light in me shielded from view
I journey through life
Seeking out meaning in the abyss
Stumbling through the dark
Yearning for the unattainable touch
I give up my foolish quest
And freefall in the darkness
Of my emotion
This solitude an odd comfort
And in this comfort my realization is made
As in life
We are in death
Alone
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Copyright 2003 Qwendragoness
Published on Tuesday, October 7, 2003.
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On Saturday, August 24, 2019, Silver Spectre
(90)
wrote:
I am glad to see that your writing received a long overdue recognition from the sites other poets. I would like to see more from my friend. Closer than most friends I have ever had. In Darkness we find a Planeterization of a mystery we have brought ourselves to. Which way to shine a light in its gravity and history is a journey just for one. This was well spoken and with truthful words that bloom. I wonder what you found there.
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A former member wrote:
I feel like you captured my emotions better than I can. Great job.
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On Monday, June 7, 2004, Blood of Winter
(296) wrote:
well done, I love the meloncholy ending that just jumps out with soft whispers of nothingness...
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A former member wrote:
tight,,,all i can say is tight
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On Tuesday, November 18, 2003, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
sweetly despondant, concise to a great point, you have spoken well here.......urban
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On Sunday, October 12, 2003, CharlottesWeb
(511) wrote:
Oh!! I do love this one! I could spend quite a while picking out every secret behind ever line of this one...not to mention those between. You write in a unique way...that is very much like my own. Lol..funny way to put it huh? Well, this is a fantastic p
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On Sunday, October 12, 2003, CharlottesWeb
(511) wrote:
fantastic peice. ~JMDW~
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On Friday, October 10, 2003, Drea
(1443) wrote:
nothing i say can match what it made me feel. i agree with fallen. ~Drea~
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On Thursday, October 9, 2003, The Fallen Angel
(235) wrote:
Can we say beautiful? Yes we can because it is a write of greatness+Fallen One+
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On Tuesday, October 7, 2003, Delilah
(113) wrote:
We all feel alone sometimes...this was good, I like...~Delilah~
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On Tuesday, October 7, 2003, Qwendragoness
(12) wrote:
thank you all
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On Tuesday, October 7, 2003, streetpoet
(25) wrote:
Wonderfuly written. It creates a type of image that makes sadness and isolation seem beautiful
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On Tuesday, October 7, 2003, Silver Spectre
(90) wrote:
Very good. And of course I can't wait to see your next. ~silver
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On Tuesday, October 7, 2003, Qwendragoness
(12) wrote:
thanks
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On Sunday, October 12, 2003, Lydia Jade
(1350) wrote:
it seems we have alot in common! ~Blood~
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On Tuesday, October 7, 2003, Qwendragoness
(12) wrote:
i will as soon as i get some finished
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