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Envy
By Qwendragoness
Dark brown hair spills
Like chocolate over her vanilla skin
Piercing eyes stare out like chunks of black coal
Her glare strikes me
With a thunderous blow
With a deep knowing
That what is hers I harbor most dear
His glance turns the second it catches hers
To hide the secrets hidden deep
The charade kept at bay
In a passing moment
Our lips meet
Our embrace convincing
To all who see
A happy new couple
All the while
My deep wish
Kept like a dragons gold
To be to him as only she can be
My envy darkens my soul
Weakening my resolve
And destroys my very being
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Copyright 2003 Qwendragoness
Published on Tuesday, November 4, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Envy"
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A former member wrote:
I love this one; the imagery, and the raw portrayal on the well-known feeling to all; envy.
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A former member wrote:
good with words
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On Monday, June 7, 2004, Blood of Winter
(296)
wrote:
if anyone says that they can not relate to this piece in some way that person is a fucking lier, you have ensnared the feeling of Envy and put it to pen and paper...
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On Monday, May 17, 2004, Mute Serenade
(389) wrote:
steady emotional ride. "the other" put to so much beauty..... awesome. Sue
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A former member wrote:
"kept like a dragons gold" Great write.+T.P.U+
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On Thursday, November 6, 2003, Silver Spectre
(95) wrote:
I amglad you did not take this down as you said you would.It is a very good write and you brought to these words such emotion.~Silver~
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On Tuesday, November 4, 2003, AshtrayDirt
(31) wrote:
i like the last stanza. the first stanza i think i could be broken up a bit...the wordiness of it makes it loose it impact.
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On Tuesday, November 4, 2003, Dancing_Monkey
(1228) wrote:
Wow.. that was a good write, and I like how you cant help but use the word dragon. the ending make me feel like someone looking to the side as the kiss were made. did that make sense I dont know.. good write. Monkey
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