Comments by All Members
- "Yep, you're right, you DO know how to get lost.....It's quite beautiful that far out though, I think. "I've seen the bent rift of the fading Under Horizon
alluring and treacherous, yet so utterly amazing" , If you get stuck in that rift, we're gonna have a hard time pulling you back............It's a deep one! Cool read, write on my friend! "
Posted by Peyton1 on "Twilight Star" by Sean Mc Shane
- "spectral flash and flicker of azure and emerald...
the mystic Fires of Forever always blazing... Amazing view up there, Sean* Thanks for the stellar visions :)~"
Posted by blue angel on "Twilight Star" by Sean Mc Shane
- "Aye Sean - last line first stanza "a part" maybe? But then it does work both ways too! You are getting squishy on me and I shall now write a poem that you just inspired with "Fields of Fried Chicken" (like my brain) - cheers laddie!"
Posted by dwells on "Twilight Star" by Sean Mc Shane
- "There's only one kind of love that feels like that! You capture it's essence so well with this soft side of your pen... Very much enjoy a good love story once in a while, the little things are important........."
Posted by Peyton1 on "The Little Things" by Sean Mc Shane
- "...Damn!...I can't even say how I feel after that, there really aren't words. That was one of the most powerful poems I have ever read, I am in awe............................"
Posted by Peyton1 on "Epic Ending" by Sean Mc Shane
- "Sean when you got here i knew you were gonna rise fast. you stayed and stay under the radar. you are a poetic star. never did i imagine reading something so elegant and sensual yet ofcourse still manly.. i bow to you . much love .. "
Posted by Devilish on "Today is Tomorrow, Yesterday is Just Ahead" by Sean Mc Shane
- "Just......Damn!! You had me at to-yester-morrow-day! This is an awesome write. I imagine if there were a way to perfectly describe existence in a time rift....you just nailed it! The play on words intertwining past, present, and future as one time frame was mind boggling! And you made it look so easy. Hats off to you, MUCH enjoyed this work. Thanks for posting it."
Posted by Peyton1 on "Today is Tomorrow, Yesterday is Just Ahead" by Sean Mc Shane
- "you'll know I haven't moved too far
coming full circle around a golden star.....stunner of a line... you've carved a beautiful cosmic romance... she stands gracefully among your stardust imagery... adorned by eyes of magic, perfectly confused, well done****"
Posted by blue angel on "Today is Tomorrow, Yesterday is Just Ahead" by Sean Mc Shane
- "... tis a note written upon a harsh and lonely breeze... when love and life are left to falter...it brings us all to our knees... Excellent S"
Posted by BlackVelvet Rose on "Epic Ending" by Sean Mc Shane
- "Thank you Lord for the gift of life
but now I wish to return it
all that I created I leave behind
nothing worth saving so just burn it
... I love you sean you are the lyrical mad man. i logged in for you and dwells ,. i knew it would be worth it. ill be faithful forever."
Posted by Devilish on "Epic Ending" by Sean Mc Shane
- "loneliness is a devouring beast turning the real me into a ghost:)~ heavy poetry here, glad you added the authors note :) executed perfectly*"
Posted by blue angel on "Epic Ending" by Sean Mc Shane
- "Eh Sean this is a schwanze song if I ever heard one. Think I'll email you with a riposte (whatever that is) - cheers and don't look back laddie."
Posted by dwells on "Epic Ending" by Sean Mc Shane
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