Comments by All Members
- "thank you :)....growing up people always asked why i called myself the rose and love red roses so i wrote down my explanation..."
Posted by rosemaiden on "The Rose" by rosemaiden
- "I like how you personify the rose in a way by telling what each part of the rose shows about it."
Posted by Unknown on "The Rose" by rosemaiden
- "The third stanza tripped me up a bit, but I really enjoy the oldtimey feel to any tale of swords and sorcerers, thanks for this ."
Posted by dwells on "Battle Born" by rosemaiden
- "Unsure what turns them around in the last stanza, but many of the lines in this poem were worthy and well thought out, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Cycle Of Sorrow" by rosemaiden
- "I felt the longing in this piece...you have a very readable delivery ... I hate waking, filled with longing, at the crux of some marvelous discovery...write on..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "The Mind's Haunting" by rosemaiden
- "I like this place, in the misty trees, lost in the dark, losing my mind...allowing the moon to guide me. I need to go there now..."
Posted by boneplate on "Night's Evolution" by rosemaiden
- "Perfect, and not a werewolf in sight! Thanks so much for this vision of twilight in the woods, and then another day's dawning."
Posted by dwells on "Night's Evolution" by rosemaiden
- "I loved the evolution of the night and the coming morning based on the gradients of light... The sounds of animals moving quietly, this line hit me.. Nice write
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Posted by whisperingwalls on "Night's Evolution" by rosemaiden
- ""...caused by you" - assuming that "you" is a former lover (and not your heart's natural state) then perhaps this feeling was there from the beginning, and that it could not be overcome by the other "you", which lead to your rejection and dejection. In other words - we tend to blame others, to speak bluntly. Very thought provoking piece and thanks."
Posted by dwells on "The Heart's Lamentation" by rosemaiden
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