Comments by All Members
- "So the greatest beauty comes with the price of pain perhaps, very interesting perspective and somewhat self-deprecating. My old uncle used to say "she was a wallflower at the dance, but a dandelion in the grass" Cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Tis A Curse" by rosemaiden
- "...this is perfectly rendered, the body of the poem appearing as a tornado...I can almost see the words spinning inside it... "
Posted by FadedBlues on "Tornado Mentality " by rosemaiden
- "thinking of this poem I looked for the moon as I was smoking outside, but alas, she was obscured by cloud cover...I only saw a faint impression of light where she was...shine on : )"
Posted by Patches on "Celestial Maiden" by rosemaiden
- "" dance with the wind
scream with the thunder
oceans to rise up and take me under"
Excellent. I can see you on the beach with a storm approaching dancing and singing. Actually that sounds like a fun thing to do.
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Posted by Unknown on "Condemned Desires" by rosemaiden
- "RM I completely agree with Haunted in that your poetry is improving greatly as time goes on. Sounds like you're ready for a walk on the wild side with this one, cheers! And very well done too I might add, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Condemned Desires" by rosemaiden
- "awesome maiden, i swear every poem just gets better and better every time i read you. your poem really has an enchantingly dark feel to it. and i think it is just amazing! an excellent write you have here!"
Posted by haunted on "Condemned Desires" by rosemaiden
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