Comments by All Members
- "This is pretty awesome. We both have a poem titled "The Wanderer". But I'd prefer yours, I really like the wording. Especially "Spaces where....Spirit.""
Posted by A Dispelled Truth on "The Wanderer" by With love_Crow
- "Easier for a camel to pass thru the eye of a needle, than a rich man to enter the gates of heaven (Jesus?). Anyway, this was indeed superb and somebody or something has definitely lit your fire! Cheers."
Posted by dwells on "King of Spades" by With love_Crow
- "Guessing that you were looking at yourself maybe, with the eyes of another. You could have taken a narcissistic turn, but didn't, well done!"
Posted by dwells on "Ceramic " by With love_Crow
- "Not sure what the French was doing in the second to last stanza, but it was quirky and unexpected in the best way possible, just like this piece. Nicely done."
Posted by Unknown on "Ceramic " by With love_Crow
- "Boy, ain't that the truth now! This was great and maybe moms are indeed our best audience. But then some things would disturb her - enter Dark Poetry! Well done WLC. "
Posted by dwells on "Poetic Cannibals" by With love_Crow
- "Thought provoking wonderful pen, I like it when things build up and spill over in ink, an emptying of me when it gets too heavy to carry around on the most part...I like to read the depth of others too. :)"
Posted by Magdalena on "Poetic Cannibals" by With love_Crow
- "I've been researching the conscious and it's different levels today, something I do once in a while, it fascinates me...... This is an excellent write."
Posted by Magdalena on "Insanity " by With love_Crow
- "Thank you Dwells. It just struck me while listening to the song "Wild Horses." The idea would not leave until I wrote it down. "
Posted by With love_Crow on "Insanity " by With love_Crow
- "Never quite heard the wild horses simile used in this fashion, but then you always seem to put a unique spin on the usual. Well done and thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Insanity " by With love_Crow
- "I always thought those might be raven wings on your screen pic - but what is that harness thing behind you? This was great and really liked the simile with the ravens. What is it they call a massive flight / swarm of blackbirds? A rage is it? I forget but this reminded me of that - it was on YouTube last month. Cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Ravens in dispersion " by With love_Crow
- "Wow I really love how you connected love with despair. This poem reminds me of some of Edgar Allan Poes works. Nicely done."
Posted by Unknown on "The Wanderer" by With love_Crow
- "This is a very tragic poem. It appears that even when you reach the one you want, you will only find despair and emptiness, because the one you seek is the one who causes you pain. You only know pain, so pain is all you know to look for. If my interpretation is off, please forgive me. However, this is very lovely, yet dark and tragic. "
Posted by Unknown on "The Wanderer" by With love_Crow
- "Unknowing shades from the Garden of Eden, while life cherishes the cubic zirconium brilliance indeed - superb write as always, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Day Dreamer " by With love_Crow
- "I like this. It has meaning. Crafted from experience. It has feeling. Using both sides of the mind. I think the second half of the apple will be the most delicious and meaning full. Ever wonder if Adam and Eve finished their apple?"
Posted by bpathos on "Day Dreamer " by With love_Crow
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