Ravens in dispersion

By With love_Crow

These ravens are
In dispersion
Dividing the night
Imprinting violent emotions
In spectrums of shadows
Embracing the stars
Swallowing all
That's in sight
And away they fly
Beaks stained with
Pallor and the sparkle of
Diamonds they've taken
From my sky
I am a mute witness
To the thievery
To the taking of my sanity
Now my vision is red
For the poison they've planted
Has started a fright
And as it spreads
I feel hunger for
Astral projections
I have become
A raven too.

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Copyright 2012 With love_Crow
Published on Wednesday, March 28, 2012.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • dwells On Thursday, March 29, 2012, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    I always thought those might be raven wings on your screen pic - but what is that harness thing behind you? This was great and really liked the simile with the ravens. What is it they call a massive flight / swarm of blackbirds? A rage is it? I forget but this reminded me of that - it was on YouTube last month. Cheers!

  • Devilish On Thursday, March 29, 2012, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    Beautiful my darling.. Scholar

  • haunted On Wednesday, March 28, 2012, haunted (837)By person wrote:

    what a great poem! i loved the ending of projecting into what you see. awesome!

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