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"Wow welcome to another great poet, good write."
Posted by TyrantAvDetForbannet on "The Cruelty of Fate " by With love_Crow

"Damn your good... Wow!! It's not your fault that you were born to write... Lol... I love it!!"
Posted by Devilish on "The Cruelty of Fate " by With love_Crow

"I really like this. I like how you relate different things that happened in history and were made into books to fate. "
Posted by Unknown on "The Cruelty of Fate " by With love_Crow

"I'm partial to the first two stanzas, the metaphorical description of such agony and despair, sirens to the shore seeking haven in the next misfortune, the next to fall prey to the shiny dark charms... nice imagery and message... those dead dreams, untimely ghosts, let not their songs sing to thee, let not this sea become your reality, lest you care not for the breath of your own dreams.... maybe, well composed work, ms crow."
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Cerulean Deception " by With love_Crow

"I was thinking a couple weeks ago of writing on this very same subject, but the words eluded me. looks like you found them. well done."
Posted by Patches on "Shadow" by With love_Crow

"this kinda has a been there before kinda feel to it. I really dig it."
Posted by Patches on "Cerulean Deception " by With love_Crow

"Beautifully dark. I am reminded of the sirens. Well crafted work, Wl_C. I really love the last stanza the best. Thanks for the supreme effort."
Posted by Unknown on "Cerulean Deception " by With love_Crow

"This is really good. It has very good imagery. You can almost picture a shipwreck within the sea and bodies within it. And the feeling that comes from this piece is just magical."
Posted by Unknown on "Cerulean Deception " by With love_Crow

"I like how you have a continuous structure within the poem. Also, it is good as it shows questions someone could be asking about their own shadow. Wondering if it is a part of them or who is the real one. Really good :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Shadow" by With love_Crow

"Nice job writing on a standard theme, yet in a very engaging presentation. Well done, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Shadow" by With love_Crow

"so emotive this poem made me feel tearful great work!"
Posted by Mona on "Souless" by With love_Crow

"as tears run their course, I remember you... such beauty rendered... a real piece of poetry, thank-you, both of you..."
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "My Black Dahlia " by With love_Crow

"This touched me deep inside.... And normally I would make a pun here, but in respect I won't... Just beautiful, thanks. "
Posted by Dragonfly on "My Black Dahlia " by With love_Crow

"Exquisite piece and one of the finest things I've read lately, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Balance" by With love_Crow

"As always dear... Lovely......"
Posted by Devilish on "The Naked Truth " by With love_Crow

"war... nothing civil about it.. I don't know where that came from, but I believe it's as old as the practice itself. I liked "To stain the playground for their mothers." quite the dramatic image, filled with irony and developing the atrocity that humanity wages upon itself... like a fish out of water, unable to contend with the air we share.... maybe. thanks."
Posted by The Dybbuk on "The Naked Truth " by With love_Crow

"" though the sidewalk leads to nowhere" I really liked that line. Overall this was a great write. Thanks for sharing."
Posted by River Lily on "The Naked Truth " by With love_Crow

"Fan Fucking Tastic... A I stare upon that hue... My fingers itch to paint you blue... I love that.... LOve it!!!"
Posted by Devilish on "Paint you...Blue" by With love_Crow

"I can relate to this one far more than I'd like."
Posted by Unknown on "After the fact of dying " by With love_Crow

"Ode to an hourglass, nice metaphor, and a very patient outlook on love and life, thanks. "
Posted by dwells on "After the fact of dying " by With love_Crow

"Best work I have seen all night. I finally found someone who knows how to paint word pictures. Painfully pleasing!"
Posted by Unknown on "After the fact of dying " by With love_Crow

"I read this yesterday, but was unable to find the words to comment accurately enough to voice my thoughts on this. I am still unable, but I was no means going to pass by without letting you know how much I love this poem. You, my friend, have talent. Show us more of this wonderful skill you posses. Brava!!"
Posted by Ladyhawke on "Paint you...Blue" by With love_Crow

"excellently created dude. what a thing to say. wonderful. :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Paint you...Blue" by With love_Crow

"What a beautiful poem has so much hurt pain and questioning lovely just lovely and welcome to DP hope to read more from you "
Posted by myths demon on "Souless" by With love_Crow

"HELL FUCKIN YEAH!!! I love it!! You have perfect ryhme sceme ... Beautiful expression... And perfect delivery! I'm fucking impressed ... and for this to be your first post, you will love it here... Welcome to DarkPoetry... You eva wana play with the DEvil, im a click away..."
Posted by Devilish on "Souless" by With love_Crow

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