Cerulean Deception
By With love_Crow
Blackened seas
Littered with the carcasses of broken dreams
Hexes
whispering through the tides
To claw their way to eroded shore lines
They beckon me
Offering a petri dish of magical things
Of cursed jewels and mermaids tears
And shells sculpted from childish
fears
How they sing!
Songs of wonder and all of the things
that they have seen
Of widows flinging into their arms
And
sailors falling for their shipwreck charms
I dive in deep
For the call is too enticing to contravene
Its glacial fingers
caress my form
I suddenly wish for them to be warm
It
burns to breathe
How is it that they've abruptly lost their gentility
They're hands are rough and none too kind
Is this what I had so
hoped to find?
Their love is bleak
I feel nothing as I
sink into eternal sleep
In their benthic zone hides untimely ghosts
Fallen for the same ingenious hoax.
Comments on "Cerulean Deception "
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On Thursday, November 24, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet
(273) wrote:
awesome write.
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On Wednesday, November 23, 2011, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
Beautiful!!! ...
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A former member wrote:
Beautifully dark. I am reminded of the sirens. Well crafted work, Wl_C. I really love the last stanza the best. Thanks for the supreme effort.
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On Thursday, November 24, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet
(273) wrote:
same here.
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A former member wrote:
This is really good. It has very good imagery. You can almost picture a shipwreck within the sea and bodies within it. And the feeling that comes from this piece is just magical.