Cerulean Deception

By With love_Crow

Blackened seas
Littered with the carcasses of broken dreams
Hexes whispering through the tides
To claw their way to eroded shore lines

They beckon me
Offering a petri dish of magical things
Of cursed jewels and mermaids tears
And shells sculpted from childish fears

How they sing!
Songs of wonder and all of the things that they have seen
Of widows flinging into their arms
And sailors falling for their shipwreck charms

I dive in deep
For the call is too enticing to contravene
Its glacial fingers caress my form
I suddenly wish for them to be warm

It burns to breathe
How is it that they've abruptly lost their gentility
They're hands are rough and none too kind
Is this what I had so hoped to find?

Their love is bleak
I feel nothing as I sink into eternal sleep
In their benthic zone hides untimely ghosts
Fallen for the same ingenious hoax.









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Copyright 2011 With love_Crow
Published on Wednesday, November 23, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • TyrantAvDetForbannet On Thursday, November 24, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet (273)By person wrote:

    awesome write.

  • Devilish On Wednesday, November 23, 2011, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    Beautiful!!! ... Scholar

  • A former member wrote: Beautifully dark. I am reminded of the sirens. Well crafted work, Wl_C. I really love the last stanza the best. Thanks for the supreme effort. Scholar

  • TyrantAvDetForbannet On Thursday, November 24, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet (273)By person wrote:

    same here.

  • A former member wrote: This is really good. It has very good imagery. You can almost picture a shipwreck within the sea and bodies within it. And the feeling that comes from this piece is just magical.

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