Comments by All Members
- "Interesting thoughts on the cycle of punishment and self-recriminations. Oh how we torture ourselves, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Pain" by Ashes the Emo Fae
- "simple and straight to the point. love is multifaceted... there are so many types of love one can express and so many ways to do so. and yes, we all deserve to feel loved... it is the most positive emotion that helps us strive.
good job!"
Posted by natalie on "The Faerie's Veiw" by Ashes the Emo Fae
- "i like the concept of this, but there was something about it that took away from the overall piece that i can t seem to put my finger on. {sorry about the critic but i read and reread this and i felt that although i liked it something was missing or not blending with it to help the flow.}
welcome to dp. hope i helped not hurt as this is not my intention."
Posted by natalie on "Falling, Not Flying" by Ashes the Emo Fae
- "i love "silence isnt the answer, leaves
room to think". theres alot of chaos in
your poem, and i felt that. we want the peace and when we get it. it creates the
chaos again. hope thats what you meant.
excelent poem!"
Posted by haunted on "Stop" by Ashes the Emo Fae
- "sounds like its going in a direction of just being lovers in lust. why spoil a good
thing. lovers usually fall in love though.
good luck. loved your poem!"
Posted by haunted on "Him" by Ashes the Emo Fae
- "that was very nice, sad and uplifting. i get baby birds that fall from my tree quite
often. they were not pushed there usually killed by the very element that
carries them away. wind beneath their
wings. i loved your poem!"
Posted by haunted on "Falling, Not Flying" by Ashes the Emo Fae
- "Don't let all the angst and gnashing of teeth get you down. You are exactly right about needing to take a breather and live a little. Shutting up now, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Stop" by Ashes the Emo Fae
- ""Better to have love and lost, than never loved at all" - Shakespeare I think but appropriate here. We all feel this way when we are younger, until something comes along. Well done."
Posted by dwells on "The Watcher" by Ashes the Emo Fae
- "Thank You ^^ I've been wanting to write it for a couple years, but it just didn't seem like the right time up until recently, if that makes any sense. And thank you ^-^ "
Posted by Ashes the Emo Fae on "Porcelain Mask" by Ashes the Emo Fae
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