The Knight in Shadow Armor

Oh elusive knight with armor of midnight

Why must thou hide in the shadows of light?

Thou hast shown the path of love and life

And yet hide away from its very sight.

How does that make sense Sir Knight?

Thou speak of love for all those cared about

And yet warn against loving Thou

Yet thou art cared about most throughout

Dost thou see how this doth sound?

Oh elusive knight with plate of shadow

Dost thou whisper words so hollow?

While I do not wish it so

I simply cannot wait, have to know

Is it wrong to love thee, or no?

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Published on Monday, July 25, 2011. Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"

Comments on "The Knight in Shadow Armor"

A former member wrote: I enjoyed this work!
On Monday, July 25, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet (274) wrote:

very interesting concept, i enjoyed this. good write.
On Monday, July 25, 2011, Ladyhawke (394) wrote:

I love the "thous" and 'dosts". Ive never been creative enough to even comtimplate using them. But the result is so beautiful, much like this:)
On Saturday, August 6, 2011, Ashes the Emo Fae (7) wrote:

Thanks ^^; I'm surprised it turned out as well as it did with the thous and dost....Just thought it would fit better since it was about a Knight >.>;
On Monday, July 25, 2011, Devilish (2655) wrote:

It seems as though theres been a fair warning given which is rare... I like that! Nice!