Comments by All Members
- "The bleak history of humanity told in a most graceful manner. There is much to think and ponder over this poem. Congrats for such a theme and construction. "
Posted by Unknown on "When Guns Go Silent" by dwells
- "This makes me think of today's misinformation and the chaos that insues coming to a head.
- DH"
Posted by Divine hell on "Harvest Moon" by dwells
- "My favourite line in this work of art,"doomed by the opiate of our ignorance...'
Wow Sir Dwells! Killer line in a killer piece!"
Posted by natalie on "Harvest Moon" by dwells
- "I liked this one very much, the notion of impending oblivion while the universe shrugs in indifference... gaze into this mirror, you will live or die quite independent of the number of likes and retweets. With the next upgrade to html, no one will even be able to find evidence of them again. Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Harvest Moon" by dwells
- "this piece reinforced how scary a situation we face....and i wonder how we can fix this.
well done Sir Dwells i'm back to panic mode."
Posted by natalie on "Guinea Pig" by dwells
- "Absolutely heartbreaking dwells. I hoped that I wouldn’t live to see it go down like this. But here we are. Stunning as always my brother. Stay well - m0"
Posted by molock on "Entrepreneur" by dwells
- "Many thanks TCM; I just returned to audit the closing (it's now a quatrain). Cheers! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "Entrepreneur" by dwells
- "Excellent work, Dan! Sometimes we are all "minions" in one form or another and then there are those in power who are a Minionship all their own disguised like a cowardly sheep in wolfskin."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Minion" by dwells
- "Just some terse tercets to pass the time, friends PV and Mo. I could write a separate poem for each verse (and probably already have). Cheers both! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "Minion" by dwells
- "Fuck me, this is one of the cleverest and best-executed rhyme schemes I've seen here.
Take a bow. Outstanding. "
Posted by purr_verse on "Minion" by dwells
- "Your words are always so graceful but pack a powerful punch. They Never teach us about the real scientists but instead bury their work while promoting theatrical equations as reality . I feel at home reading your work dwells. Stay safe my brother from another mother. peace - m0"
Posted by molock on "Minion" by dwells
- "So did Neson Rockefeller's grandson T.S. (he was the main course).
Cheers too to 13 and Mo! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "Party Time" by dwells
- "This is my absolute favorite write of yours ! Hell it reminded me of home.. God how i miss home... awesome brother...13......"
Posted by 13sonsofgod on "Party Time" by dwells
- "Remind me not to go near that neighborhood I don’t want to be the main course. kind of prophetic dwells, I could see this being the new norm at some point given the current state of things. Stay safe my friend, later - m0"
Posted by molock on "Party Time" by dwells
- "Many thanks PV and there is nothing worse than anticipating a predictable rhyme in the next line. Some people refuse to read it at all. I have dabbled in both (beats doing crosswords).
I learned meter and form on another site about 10 years ago, when Jack had difficulty enrolling me in a DP class.
Nice to finally meet you too! Cheers! and I love robots - Dan "
Posted by dwells on "The Schism" by dwells
- "this scared me...i have often thought like this and try to avoid the "schisms"...well done Sir Dwells!"
Posted by natalie on "The Schism" by dwells
- "ay ay ay... these are the times and technology is the new world order..well wrought Sir Dwells! stay safe everyone!"
Posted by natalie on "Asymptomatic in Salem" by dwells
- "Damn dwells this is so on point ,the deep state will save us with vaccines. Don’t even get me going on the Nazi snitches, I’ll go flippin’ bananas. Much live my brother-peace -m0"
Posted by molock on "Asymptomatic in Salem" by dwells
- "What a scary thought ... love from a machine! Don’t give ‘em any ideas dwells , lol. As always you leave the reader with something to think about. Kind of Orwellian. I really enjoyed this. Peace brother- m0"
Posted by molock on "The Schism" by dwells
- "oh, I'm sure it'll be fine. just click that "I Agree" button for the terms and conditions, and don't read the fine print. hell, these corporations already own our information, and infiltrate our lives everyday."
Posted by Patches on "Asymptomatic in Salem" by dwells
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