Comments by All Members
- "Astoundingly good. Each line finely crafted, leading the reader through with no squirming room. Lightning bright ending!"
Posted by Leineco on "Dead Butterflies" by TakeMeAsIAm
- "wow..I knew from the first two stanzas that something sad was coming, but the last few lines hit me nonetheless..I love the pretty imagery set up here, the pale green sheets and the tangerine pillow..the color in this piece made the ending that much more striking. "
Posted by Unknown on "West Shore Baby" by TakeMeAsIAm
- "beautiful poem, I especially loved the last stanza and the concluding lines.."their stomachs filled with the weight of dead butterflies." stunning."
Posted by Unknown on "Dead Butterflies" by TakeMeAsIAm
- "I loved this! I suffer from Dual Identity Disorder, so I can TOTALLY relate to this. It was amazing and touched my soul."
Posted by Silent Partner on "Reflection" by TakeMeAsIAm
- "short but sweet as wine can be.... with a bit of an aftertaste, perhaps, like copper maybe. Well conceived little piece here.... and yet, I wonder if you know the song... some Marley anyone? I wonder if another word could be tossed in there to carry the stars theme... just an afterthought... thanks for sharing. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7GMD9DvztVs"
Posted by Unknown on "Red, Red Wine" by TakeMeAsIAm
- "life is like a poem.... hehe, a narrative, as Paul Ricoeur would have us believe... as we spin our tales we can only hope to not fall prey to our own linguistic devices.... and perhaps.... our audience, as in this case.... maybe..... love the analogy, hope you keep your pages to yourself ;) haha, and .... thanks for sharing."
Posted by Unknown on "Something More Than Nothing" by TakeMeAsIAm
- "Fuckin blood clots' Well I'm glad it has'nt ran it's coarse cuzz your here and im here and oooh what a fuckin feeling... Nice write!"
Posted by Devilish on "We All Fall Down" by TakeMeAsIAm
