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- "Addiction is a cruel, unforgiving monster, and kudos to anyone that finds and follows the path to recovery. I spent 30 years in a bottle, and owe my entire life to a woman who saw the real me through the alcohol. I've been sober now for 8 years.
I congratulate you on the victory of recovery. Continue to look ahead."
Posted by Hate Everyone on "An addict's cry" by SleepingDead
- "Addiction is a bitter mistress and master: It tells you it loves you, while it breaks you apart at your very seams. There should be no shame or remorse in the loss of the feeling you've invited, but there always is. And there is no one way out of it. All have to walk their own path out, if they can find it. Powerful words you've placed here, poet. Thank you."
Posted by Skye on "An addict's cry" by SleepingDead
- "Myself as well, my lady, 25 years of it.
A year as r for me as well, and as you well know it's a vicious cycle...it controls everything we are and do..one year and I still suffer endless nights, legs swims, not being able to get comfortable, sleep 15 to 29 minutes at a time, so exhausted by day break i collapse for my longest rest...yes i also know of it's toll, my only son of on banging ice..sadly after being clean for a year and making a fatal choice to do it just one more time...he was only 28....it's one hell of a demon to deal with....anyway, it is my pleasure to meet you, . And keep yourself clean !... your write is truth, one we both well know, my work is very different here, as i am and have always been very spiritual....check my work out and you will understand...I walk my own path, and am not concerned in pacifying others lies or deceit, and can see through most, you I sense, are much as like me...us...again, enjoyed your write, 13......"
Posted by 13sonsofgod on "An addict's cry" by SleepingDead
- "Great job. I enjoyed this because I can relate. I read and write a lot too and I also hear voices like the ones you express in this poem. I hope I interpreted it write. Thanks for sharing. Have a nice day. :)"
Posted by Jonas Robinson on "They Tell Me To Write..." by SleepingDead
- "This was great. Good flow, and structure..and you really captured the essence of a sad person on the brink of death... "There he hangs
There he'll stay
A young, troubled boy
Who ran out of things to say" The ending was perfect. xoxo"
Posted by xZombie Poptartzx on "Hangman's curse" by SleepingDead
- "You can't ever run out of things to say, you have to keep your voice heard. Suicide is a sensitive subject and one thats very close to me. You delivered this very well, flows nicely."
Posted by MissAngelic on "Hangman's curse" by SleepingDead
- "I agree with Dominic - Brilliant. We all feel the writer's block and sometimes it takes doing something intense to get the flow started. This poem flowed really way - thanks for writing and sharing!"
Posted by Nehema on "They Tell Me To Write..." by SleepingDead
- "im an addict, and your my drug of choice!
i love cemeteries, and at night its very
peaceful. but theres an eerieness feel
to it, its cold. i like to just sit in the silence. theres nothing more still!
very good poem, this invoked some
scary trips at night to the cemetery
ive had! awesome!"
Posted by haunted on "Down A Dark Road" by SleepingDead
- "oh the acid trips that i took are very similar, thanks for the flashback!
you painted a very good picture in the
beginning, i almost thought i was
trippin'! awesome!"
Posted by haunted on "Lucy Has LSD" by SleepingDead
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