Hangman's curse

By SleepingDead

In the gloom of the night
Down a dark, broken road
In an empty house
He sits there alone

Cigarette after cigarette
He thumps on the floor
Pill after pill
But he stll wants more

He knows it's there
Hanging in the shadows
Calling out his name
When the cold wind blows

He stares up at it
He can hear a whisper in his ear
"Do it. Do it. What are you waiting for?
Sunlight is drawing near."

Tears fill his eyes
As he rises from his seat
He tightens the knot
And kicks it out from under his feet

There he hangs
There he'll stay
A young, troubled boy
Who ran out of things to say

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Copyright 2013 SleepingDead
Published on Monday, July 29, 2013.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • xZombie Poptartzx On Monday, July 29, 2013, xZombie Poptartzx (332)By person wrote:

    This was great. Good flow, and structure..and you really captured the essence of a sad person on the brink of death... "There he hangs There he'll stay A young, troubled boy Who ran out of things to say" The ending was perfect. xoxo

  • FearlessDragon On Monday, July 29, 2013, FearlessDragon (137)By person wrote:

    That last line fully captures the emotion and tragedy of this piece. Well penned!

  • devilsrighthand On Monday, July 29, 2013, devilsrighthand (27)By person wrote:

    Nice and dark, I enjoyed this, thanks

  • Deathkitten On Monday, July 29, 2013, Deathkitten (571)By person wrote:

    Ran out of things to say mmm yes, but delivered the subject quite well. Love it!

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