Comments by All Members
- "Excellent, yet so simple at the same time. Sounds just like betraying and sadness, too. Wicked poem! =) "
Posted by Unknown on "Why?" by Spikes_of_Blue
- "very good love poem. I agree with dei, and think that this poem expresses good imagery....I hope that you get what you deserve:)
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Posted by maggot death on "losing you" by Spikes_of_Blue
- "i loved it vary good write i would change the ending a little 2 make it flow better like fo example instead of "but I guess I heard,a false testimony" i would change it 2 "but i guess thats a lie" it would sound much better i think ne way good job "
Posted by Frater Synth on "hurt" by Spikes_of_Blue
- "Ah Ben im worried about you. this was a beautiful write and a terrible topic. please call me sometime-NAtelle"
Posted by Dei on "Maroon" by Spikes_of_Blue
- "dont try to rhyme so much. maybe try this same story without a rhyme scheme. i promise you that it will turn out even more beautifully"
Posted by Unknown on "Maroon" by Spikes_of_Blue
- "hmmm that sounds all too familiar. i was cheated in a number of ways. but i won't get into my drama."
Posted by Unknown on "Erin" by Spikes_of_Blue
- "I really like this piece, it shows so much emotion, and i really like the way you end it, great write. ~Jenni"
Posted by Jenni on "Brutus" by Spikes_of_Blue
- "unfortuneatly things didnt work out. She cheated on me and left me cause she didnt want to be tied. i despise the whore now."
Posted by Spikes_of_Blue on "Erin" by Spikes_of_Blue
- "i use to feel this way about a girl named erin as well. she was my bestfriend. what a coincidence. hopefully things with the two of you will work out a hell of a lot better than things did for us. :/....anyway the poem is beautiful, and i love the rhyme s"
Posted by Unknown on "Erin" by Spikes_of_Blue
- "actually shes the biggest narcicist I've known and is therefore incapable of establishing real relationships...so while i loved her she merely stayed with me because she enjoyed the image of importance being with me."
Posted by Spikes_of_Blue on "Erin" by Spikes_of_Blue
- "i love the flow and the irony, lol. you did a great job with this one...............-samone"
Posted by Unknown on "Irony" by Spikes_of_Blue
- "This is one of your best pieces Ben. Its very raw. filled with an anger few can understand. your on my fav list babe. i hope you find something better with your new girlfriend"
Posted by Dei on "Brutus" by Spikes_of_Blue
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