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I wish...
By Spikes_of_Blue
I wish i could be happy,
just like everybody else,
but no one seems to love me,
they put me on the shelf,
there they make me wait,
for my chance to shine,
dangling love as bait,
how i wish it could be mine,
but its always snatched right from my face,
and i fall deep into this hole,
i wish i could be out of this place,
and free my laden soul.
Every day i am so tired,
my will to live gets less,
how i wish i had expired,
and been rid of all this mess,
this love drives me crazy,
is there something that i missed?
hopefully my heart will grow too lazy,
and i will cease to exist.
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Copyright 2003 Spikes_of_Blue
Published on Tuesday, August 5, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "I wish..."
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On Tuesday, April 11, 2006, Beautiful Scars
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wrote:
good work, i like your writing style :)
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On Saturday, January 1, 2005, Dei
(663) wrote:
pretty good stuff
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A former member wrote:
very hope filled
great song of sorrow
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On Monday, September 29, 2003, blackdarkness
(227) wrote:
me likes!!! this is the first work i have read of yours....i will be sure to read more
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On Tuesday, August 19, 2003, Rebel_Angel
(321) wrote:
I like! I love the beginning and I feel the same way! :(
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On Thursday, August 14, 2003, Drea
(1388) wrote:
i loved this poem. it bares so much emotion. truely amazing. ~Drea~
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A former member wrote:
"dangling love as bait,
how i wish it could be mine,
but its always snatched right from my face," i love this..and all your work...hauntingly beautiful...
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On Wednesday, August 6, 2003, aNaRcHyPoEt
(24) wrote:
this poem is the most brilliant of all your works. "hopefully my heart will grow too alzy, and i will cease to exist." Wow. All i can say is wow. You are such a passionate poet and person. Wow. ~ap
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