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Erin
By Spikes_of_Blue
You are my pleasure,
you are my pain,
you are my sunshine,
you are my rain,
you are my contentment,
you are my sigh,
I'm so afraid to lose you,
I'd just rather die.
You are my laughter,
you are my smile,
you make my days,
all worth the while.
You are that whisper,
in my ear,
and it's your voice,
that I want to hear.
The traces of you,
left in my bed,
your long golden hair,
soft as silk thread.
All the different colors,
of your gorgeous eyes.
I never thought I'd feel this way.
It caught me by surprise.
The weight of your body,
laying on my chest.
The way that you talk,
and all of the rest,
the ways you do,
the things you do,
just make me fall,
more in love with you.
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Copyright 2004 Spikes_of_Blue
Published on Monday, February 9, 2004.
Filed under:
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Comments on "Erin"
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A former member wrote:
i use to feel this way about a girl named erin as well. she was my bestfriend. what a coincidence. hopefully things with the two of you will work out a hell of a lot better than things did for us. :/....anyway the poem is beautiful, and i love the rhyme s
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On Monday, January 3, 2005, Spikes_of_Blue
(42)
wrote:
unfortuneatly things didnt work out. She cheated on me and left me cause she didnt want to be tied. i despise the whore now.
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A former member wrote:
hmmm that sounds all too familiar. i was cheated in a number of ways. but i won't get into my drama.
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A former member wrote:
i love the rhyme scheme...........................-samone
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On Saturday, January 1, 2005, Dei
(665) wrote:
very compassionate. i can see why it hurt to have her gone. You may always fel something. If you truely did love her. But never feel regrett. im sure she felt for you too
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On Sunday, January 2, 2005, Spikes_of_Blue
(42) wrote:
actually shes the biggest narcicist I've known and is therefore incapable of establishing real relationships...so while i loved her she merely stayed with me because she enjoyed the image of importance being with me.
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A former member wrote:
I love everything you write. You are such a sweet, compassionate,almost perfect, person.
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On Wednesday, April 7, 2004, Jenni
(40) wrote:
awwww.... great write -J
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On Tuesday, February 10, 2004, Rebel_Angel
(321) wrote:
I really like this, it almost made me cry too! The love you 2 share is great! I hope it stays that way!...Always write from your heart and speak from your heart and you will never go wrong!
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A former member wrote:
Oh Shit that almost made me cry... I like it alot, Erin is lucky!
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On Monday, February 9, 2004, Exodus
(172) wrote:
awwwwwwwwww! this is really sweet..... *lucky girl*
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A former member wrote:
Very touching and from the heart. Well done. +T.P.U+
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