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without you
By Spikes_of_Blue
Struggling to keep,
my head above water,
as desire to let go,
grows even hotter,
watching you sit,
with that sad look on your face,
like I'm doing this to hurt you,
but I just cant stand this place,
I cant stand to be without you,
without you by my side,
Into your eyes I cannot look,
and from your gaze I try to hide.
You tell me to forget about you,
But I just dont want to start,
I made myself so vulnerable,
and you just ate my heart,
So I'll cry and spill my blood,
for you to wash it down,
as you watch me struggle,
but I know I'm going to drown,
With all the tears I've cried for you,
I could drown in that deep well,
your love is all I need to save me,
but I dont think you can tell,
And I feel so incomplete,
And I wish that you could see,
how happy we once were,
and how happy we could be,
And it hurts so bad without you,
because I'm without a part of me.
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Copyright 2004 Spikes_of_Blue
Published on Friday, August 20, 2004.
Filed under:
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On Tuesday, April 11, 2006, Beautiful Scars
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wrote:
wow.. this is great so much pain and emotoin.. beatifull write..
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On Saturday, January 1, 2005, Dei
(665) wrote:
"Pain is ageless"
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On Sunday, October 17, 2004, Dommi
(96) wrote:
So sweet, and captures the pain as well. The last line really sealed in the meaning, and it had wonderful rhythm. Great work.
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On Saturday, August 21, 2004, so_skeevy
(64) wrote:
aw that's so sweet
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A former member wrote:
And it hurts so bad without you,
because I'm without a part of me/ i really like this part of the poem. Great job.
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On Friday, August 20, 2004, Savannah
(218) wrote:
I really like this - good work
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