Comments by All Members
- "This poem is very well written, comparing life to glass as it can be easily made and easily broken. My only two complaints are that it felt quite short and that you used "u" instead of "you." Other than that, I applaud this work."
Posted by harlequinn on "shattered" by draco5445
- "We live for what we fought for,
and fight for what we live for,
Just no matter what smile :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Overdose" by draco5445
- "Oooooh, chill bumps. Cool imagery here. I like the descriptiveness (i actually dont think that's a word.sorry) of everything. It really brings it to life. Keep it up:)"
Posted by Ladyhawke on "Vampire life" by draco5445
- "Nicely written. I agree with Natalie. It's not worth it. Stay strong. You have others here for you."
Posted by 10 Forty Three on "You" by draco5445
- "No matter what anyone does to you it's not worth dying over. No matter how good Death sounds. Stay strong and keep fighting."
Posted by Unknown on "Overdose" by draco5445
- "overall good concept. its very literal and thats okay, but i would add some more descriptive language."
Posted by Unknown on "Tree of Life" by draco5445
- "thank goodness this is metaphorical and you are still with us, no one should make you feel this way; badly enough to die over.
be strong and show your worth."
Posted by natalie on "You" by draco5445
- "i like the idea behind this piece.
just a few spelling and punctuation errors and it is good to go .:) thanks for sharing."
Posted by natalie on "Our Life Force" by draco5445
- "very realistic in imagery... i usually stay away from suicide pieces(lost three friends to it)
but although a gruesome topic, it was well captured here.
write on.."
Posted by natalie on "Bloody Rain" by draco5445
- "One toke over the line, man....heheheh. Love your ode to weed!"
Posted by SulaMoon on "4:20" by draco5445
- "very true, I find that music is the only thing that has kept me inspired in my life. I play guitar and love it, and I always want to become better and I like that music influences us in so many ways. "
Posted by Poetic-Realm on "Our Life Force" by draco5445
- "After my children, music is one of the few things that keeps me breathing sometimes. I think that goes for alot of people. Nice write :-)"
Posted by Unknown on "Our Life Force" by draco5445
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