Love Me
By draco5445
Love Me,
MY
Razor Blade.
Peel My Skin,
Make Me Scream.
Sink So Deep,
Make Me Weep.
Cut My Flesh,
Make Me Bleed.
Take My Life,
Set
Me Free.
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Copyright 2010 draco5445
Published on Wednesday, March 24, 2010.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Friday, February 11, 2011, 10 Forty Three
(543) wrote:
As deep as the pain some of us go through. Write on friend!
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A former member wrote:
this piece saddens me but real work provokes emotion.
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A former member wrote:
Perfect example of how pain can be therapeutically in some sense, i am not a cutter, but i do harm myself in punishment for my misdeeds lol nice write
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On Wednesday, April 28, 2010, foreverNalways
(39) wrote:
im trying to get out of my addiction of the razor blade. this peice is beautiful to the eyes of a cutter. pure emotion. i love it.
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On Wednesday, April 21, 2010, HeadpatSlut
(257) wrote:
I've never been a true cutter, but I'm no stranger to self harm, as well as what you're feeling in this piece, like the only thing that there is is that pain, and so it becomes habitual. This was amazing, thanks for the write.
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On Wednesday, March 24, 2010, Rowan
(197) wrote:
I liked the flow of this piece. The rhyming made it even better. This was a very nice write. Morbid, but nice. Write on friend. And welcome to DP. If you have any questions feel free to ask. I'll be looking forward to reading more of your stuff.