Unknown Love

By draco5445

Does anyone know who i am
I am the man you left in the dust
As your life got better we drifted apart
I helped you get were you are now
But you leave me behind
You tell me to leave you alone
You hang with my old friends
The friends you convinced that i was a loser
Now i am alone 
I have no one who cares if i were to drop dead
Not even my family will talk to me
I am truly alone
One day i say fuck it I am done
I walk up to you
I ask do you know who i am
You say no
I say we used to hang out
We used to date
You turn to your friends and laugh
I would never date a loser like you
Maybe only in your wildest dreams
I laugh and you call me a freak
I laugh harder and pull out a gun
I smile and say well wrong answer
Then turns it on then pulls the trigger
You scream then start crying
I am sorry i did know you
I just lost track of who i was
Then you take the gun
Then you put in your mouth
Then you pull the trigger
And you fall dead on top of me
Then the necklace i bought you comes out
The inscription reads "To the love of  my life"

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Copyright 2010 draco5445
Published on Friday, April 9, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • 10 Forty Three On Monday, February 14, 2011, 10 Forty Three (543)By person wrote:

    This so reminds me of a song, "The End" by Blue October. It's awesome like this poem so you should hear it.

  • Malcholm Dark On Friday, April 9, 2010, Malcholm Dark (806)By person wrote:

    Good read, I like.... If you use 'I' at the beginning of a line, use it in the middle...check your 4th line.... thanks for the write

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