Bloody Rain

By draco5445

I sit here thinking of the good times
My hands are numb
The blood oozes from my wrist
The blade is still stuck in there
Staring at the sky i say good bye
I fall out of the tree
Only to be stopped by the snap of the rope
I hang there spinning in the rain
The water drips down my arms
Causing the water to turn red
The rain is now red with my blood
It drips off my finger tips
Down to your crying face

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Published on Sunday, January 2, 2011. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Bloody Rain"

On Wednesday, February 16, 2011, 10 Forty Three (543) wrote:

Intense. Powerful. Well done.
On Tuesday, January 4, 2011, ubiquitoussoul (343) wrote:

Damn dude..harsh..to be under your spinning figure..next to your haunting flashing shadow that flickers through the lighting..pretty vivid..blood and rain..the black of night.. that's how it sounds to me..besides some spelling errors..this was conveyed very well
A former member wrote: perfectly implemented work, sounds strong and complete