Comments by All Members
- "there is a soft reiteration that rings through this which makes the 'missing' and the ache seem so palpable......and the even more subtle rhymes that seem to gently sway into the other, like flowers in wind bending to reach the other.....beauty."
Posted by Unknown on "A life of Quiet nights" by A Life Without You
- "i really like this pic! this write is heart touching ...."I will live beneath your feet" ...appears to mean that there is an active, present and future tense to this write ......well done .....Thanks for the view!"
Posted by Opklot on "Within my reach" by A Life Without You
- "what a cool and refreshing thought! fears dissapearing into the tide and the pier stron and majestic wading through the current ......way cool!
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Posted by Unknown on "Within my reach" by A Life Without You
- "There is so much truth in these words. It is a very cold world, and the evil that lurks is just waiting to attack the innocent. I lock my doors at night and still don't feel safe.
Blessed Be."
Posted by Kittykat on "The unforgivable fall" by A Life Without You
- "I really like this metaphor "She was a broken marble birdbath
Lying half hidden in tall dry grass" Seems to add a very profound, artistic light to it."
Posted by Unknown on "A Girl," by A Life Without You
- "I have visited here so many times in the last couple of days...the solidity of the pier amidst the churn and chaos of the ocean...I love the idea of fears dissolving into the ocean...thank you"
Posted by kinkifrog on "Within my reach" by A Life Without You
- "It's destiny was too merely accelerate emotions that were already in play, weather good, bad, or sad... It makes me think of an indescribable love, perhaps a love that once existed in this mess of a world we live. but has forever hidden its face... just out of reach... only minutes have passed sense the first few lines, it now draws sadness from me as-well... thanx moony, glad u like"
Posted by A Life Without You on "Within my reach" by A Life Without You
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