Within my reach

By A Life Without You

Within my reach

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I will live beneath your feet


my love will carry you


until your fears


disappear into the sea









please...









just stay with in my reach













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Copyright 2010 A Life Without You
Published on Tuesday, September 7, 2010.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Graphic Art"
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  • A former member wrote: what a great shot! and a simple pouring of heart with the ocean. wonderful to read. thanks.

  • A former member wrote: what a cool and refreshing thought! fears dissapearing into the tide and the pier stron and majestic wading through the current ......way cool!

  • Kittykat On Sunday, October 3, 2010, Kittykat (35)By person wrote:

    So few words can say so much. This one touched me deeply. I yearn to feel this safe.

  • A former member wrote: Sort of reminds me of one of my favorite movies "eternal sunshine of the spotless mind"

  • A former member wrote: This was an impressive piece! I've Appreciated your Commendation on my work as well thank you!

  • elisa On Sunday, September 12, 2010, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    a beautiful marriage of imagery and words. i love

  • beautifullybroken On Friday, September 10, 2010, beautifullybroken (20)By person wrote:

    I love the picture and the poem. Great!

  • A former member wrote: I like the unusual perspective from where this poem comes from. Very imaginative.

  • ubiquitoussoul On Wednesday, September 8, 2010, ubiquitoussoul (346)By person wrote:

    On Wednesday, September 8, 2010, ubiquitoussoul (476) wrote: I like how you embody something more than human.. How you evolved an emotion into something wild but tame.. As powerful and beautiful as am ocean wave and the receding climb back into it's bed.. I can also visually see a synchronous melody these two art forms create.. The picture is rich ..contrast and vibrancy make it dream like.. A treasure.. The voice of the poem stirred me . Moved me along the current of the words..message..embattled me

  • ubiquitoussoul On Wednesday, September 8, 2010, ubiquitoussoul (346)By person wrote:

    Embottled .. Sorry it can get tricky on this touch screen I try my best..

  • A Life Without You On Wednesday, September 8, 2010, A Life Without You (146)By person wrote:

    Thank you friend, if just your words, then this works mission has been complete. I am glad it has moved you, thank you for your words, they are encouragement.

  • A former member wrote: My dear your words and your photo played a perfect melody together and stirred my soul. You gave me a peace on a night where there was none. =)

  • A Life Without You On Wednesday, September 8, 2010, A Life Without You (146)By person wrote:

    It is far too often when i can relate too your exact words love, thank you

  • A former member wrote: it's sad when something as sweet as this brings bitter thoughts to my mind. personally, I've always been more of a hands off kind of girl to a fault. Think earthquakes, I shimmy, I shake, and I always fall down, like london bridges. ~moony (pouts)

  • A Life Without You On Wednesday, September 8, 2010, A Life Without You (146)By person wrote:

    It's destiny was too merely accelerate emotions that were already in play, weather good, bad, or sad... It makes me think of an indescribable love, perhaps a love that once existed in this mess of a world we live. but has forever hidden its face... just out of reach... only minutes have passed sense the first few lines, it now draws sadness from me as-well... thanx moony, glad u like

  • A former member wrote: stunning photo....adding the under.current of the voice, asking, simply asking for a love a life a little thing; to stay....this kind of stuff messes with my head and heart. was completely engulfed

  • A Life Without You On Wednesday, September 8, 2010, A Life Without You (146)By person wrote:

    thx love, I shoot with a few different cameras, cannon 20D, A1, AE-1, I used a 50mm 1.8 for this shot. this was taken just south of Avila beach, CA, -glad u like

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