A life of Quiet nights
By A Life Without You
I awoke this evening
and fell through the window
she left
open under my soul.
I could only imagine what caused the cracks
in her heart.
Thou I've acquired the tools to fix them;
she made me promise I wouldn't start.
.
My eyes quickly
closed
as the drops of cool night rain
began to show their
face.
These roof tops spoke of pain.
Familiar only to
some,
though left unrestrained,
would infect all available
space.
.
As darkness filled the sky from broken street lights,
every inch of my body screamed of insecurities
purchased
from a life of quiet nights.
Arguments echoed against weather
stained walls,
walls that drained sunlight from the air,
air that no longer guaranteed a soft fall.
.
Help is
on the way,
if she continued to keep standing.
Standing is
the remedy
for those accustomed to rough landings.
Hostility
because her hands are red,
pondering outcomes of last impressions.
.
An impression that I can no longer accept as predestined.
Only to realize I've made an attempt at this before.
Gripping
failure,
yet stopping just before the door.
I'll stay
on this exhilarating path I started on,
Beating blood red,
no more will those cracks be ignored.
Comments on "A life of Quiet nights"
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A former member wrote:
there is a soft reiteration that rings through this which makes the 'missing' and the ache seem so palpable......and the even more subtle rhymes that seem to gently sway into the other, like flowers in wind bending to reach the other.....beauty.
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A former member wrote:
well done, one point, if I may..."quite nights" should be "quiet nights" I think...I am quite impressed with this piece
freda
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On Tuesday, June 22, 2010, A Life Without You
(146) wrote:
hey thx, your right, fixed it... oops
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On Tuesday, April 6, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(806) wrote:
Wow, a visual roller-coaster ride at night..."darkness filled the sky from broken street lights... your imagery here is brilliant... please keep writing....