A Girl,

By A Life Without You

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She cut up pieces of her heart


...and gave them




To the only people she knew



...would save them






I said,





"you can sleep right here within these arms,

And when you awake,

you can tell me the story's,

of all the things you've misplaced''

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...''along the way.''





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A girl,






observing life rather than living it

 

Making an already difficult journey

somewhat precarious

 

She was a broken marble birdbath

Lying half hidden in tall dry grass






A door,






held shut from the inside



She tried her best to press through,



Though stopped short



For she then realized...



it was her grip, that was slipping










...on the other side



















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Copyright 2010 A Life Without You
Published on Tuesday, September 7, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"

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  • A former member wrote: I like this poem, reminds me of a girl I know... .. .

  • A former member wrote: Fell in love with this poem after i read it, nice work well done.

  • A former member wrote: I really like this metaphor "She was a broken marble birdbath Lying half hidden in tall dry grass" Seems to add a very profound, artistic light to it.

  • A former member wrote: really, it was the first stanza........the clarity and the poignancy and the....knowing [in a sorts] of this stanza.....caught me offguard......i know girl.s and guys like this.............simple this is. excellent and intimate.

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