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A Summer Night's Drive
By A Life Without You
Breathe...
I turned to the left
and watched as the cool
night air
brushed across your face,
Your right hand laced
the steering wheel
ever so softly as light descended down-Moon's
staircase
...Breathe...
I slowly sank into your
soul
though still in my seat,
As headlights glisten in the
distance
In between ghostly trees
...Breathe...
Longing again for your breath against my lips
I close
my eyes
and drift into your dream
awakened by the scream
air sings
when headlights collide
a voice so beautiful
echo's through night's sky
...Breathe...
Life
ran thick through painted blood across warm skin
as I whispered
in your ear "I love you my dear"
....may Angles lead you in
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Copyright 2010 A Life Without You
Published on Monday, March 1, 2010.
Filed under:
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Comments on "A Summer Night's Drive"
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A former member wrote:
Wickedly enchanting.
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On Saturday, May 15, 2010, keltruth7
(18)
wrote:
hauntingly beautiful
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On Monday, May 10, 2010, Riven Waker
(317) wrote:
a beautiful piece - hypnotic & serene - entrancing & soothing
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On Tuesday, May 11, 2010, A Life Without You
(146) wrote:
Hey thx for checking it out, glad u enjoyed it
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A former member wrote:
A beautiful, little story.
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On Tuesday, May 11, 2010, A Life Without You
(146) wrote:
Appreciate the comments, thanks for stopping by
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A former member wrote:
Driving into a summer night is one of my favorite pastimes...thank you for this.
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On Monday, March 1, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(806) wrote:
Incredible imagery, perfect flow. You have good talent, I enjoyed this piece. Thank-you for thr write.
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On Friday, April 2, 2010, A Life Without You
(146) wrote:
Thank you, it was actually inspired by a friend who lost the love of his life in a car accident, the only thing he could do was hold her as she took her last breath...real life ya know...
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On Tuesday, April 6, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(806) wrote:
Death always brings about great poetry... I too had an experience with death, and I wrote "Tracy"... thanks
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