Comments by All Members
- "love the ending...the neverending journey. you took a piece of the most beautiful experiences...life. the breath after the deprivation is amazing isnt it?"
Posted by Twilight on "Take A Breath" by finaldestiny
- "i hate to be repetitive, but i agree with the other. very gripping last lines. something to think about. something worth plagerism. be careful-some try to know what its like."
Posted by Twilight on "Breath Of Life" by finaldestiny
- "very hopeful. this is what i have been looking for. something uplifting. something to make me think there is some truth when someone speaks "tomorrow is a new day". i believe it. thank you."
Posted by Twilight on "At Last" by finaldestiny
- "the poem portrays a sort of " im moving on" feeling, its nice. i do plan on reading more in the future:)"
Posted by Unknown on "Another Day" by finaldestiny
- "But it's still expressing their feelings. If this poem offends people, well guess what? Suicide poetry offends me. It's not going to stop, so why do people get all riled up about this?"
Posted by Six-Out on "Another stupid suicide poem" by finaldestiny
- "ok....well i've already stated my opinion no need to say it again and again..iim bascially on the same wavelength as six. This is my opinion....take it or leave it. i've tried to commit suicide, i've been there and im just preaching my opinon after having"
Posted by finaldestiny on "Another stupid suicide poem" by finaldestiny
- "One small difference is that generally, suicide poems are written expressing a person's feelings - NOT attacking someone else. This type of poem, on the other hand, is written for the express purpose of making fun of / belittling / attacking someone. "
Posted by cre on "Another stupid suicide poem" by finaldestiny
- "ironic part is, that writing about the suicidal feelings "can" provide and "does" on many instances provide a coping mechanism that prevents thought from becoming action. I don't approve of this poem at all...but it was well written."
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "Another stupid suicide poem" by finaldestiny
- "Problem is, the attention seekers aren't the only ones who will read it. But honestly, everyone...don't give this one poem too much credit. For a serious suicidal person, one poem is not going to make or break their will."
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "Another stupid suicide poem" by finaldestiny
- "What about those who don't want to read them? You say to turn the other cheek, why can't you do the same here? I think everyone is entitled to their opinion. If people can write about suicide, we can write against it."
Posted by Six-Out on "Another stupid suicide poem" by finaldestiny
- "Fuck this honestly, if people want to write about death, then let them, they can do whatever the fuck they want, and you dont have to read it if you dont like, I would much rather have my sister show mw her poems about death and cutting then keeping them "
Posted by Beautiful Scars on "Another stupid suicide poem" by finaldestiny
- "since that last comment exodus left didnt give you much to go on...heres one with something to say. this speak of your honest mind. trying and struggling to make humans conform to sincerity...and friendship."
Posted by Twilight on "What did I do? Revised" by finaldestiny
- "Different take on not being cared for by someone whom you loved but did not return that feeling, "my essence is
bleeding", great imagery...^vTracerv^"
Posted by Tracer on "Naked" by finaldestiny
- "no time to waste. dont let people and things waste your time, this is your life. whothe hell are they to waste it? sorry. ignore that...lol:)"
Posted by Twilight on "Blinded" by finaldestiny
- "*continued again* you if you want the help. Also No Exit go and read Rebal_Angel's comment on this piece wait i'll save you the trouble.."haha...this is kinda funny. They always say the people that talk about commiting suicide never do it is the ones that"
Posted by finaldestiny on "Another stupid suicide poem" by finaldestiny
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