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Breath Of Life
By finaldestiny
Wishing my sorrows away
etching them on stone
blood flowing through my veins
like ink dripping on paper
Tears encrested in my eyes
unsure of what to do
save me from myself
before I wear away
Each day, Each hour
crawls through my head
unbearable for all
but here is where I lay
These shackles holding me down
cannot keep me forever
live not just to breath
but breath to live
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Copyright 2004 finaldestiny
Published on Wednesday, January 28, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Sunday, August 27, 2017, worm
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wrote:
very good!... come back and write more...
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A former member wrote:
Very deep and moving. Wonderful work. ~bows.~
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A former member wrote:
The last stanza is AMAZING. Actually, so is the first, too. And the - oh damn, this is just all so good! ~Wish Upon A Star
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On Tuesday, February 17, 2004, suicideseason
(1639) wrote:
*nods* Miss Rosie is right.amazing closing stanza...it took my breath away.-tim
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