Another Day

By finaldestiny

another brick layed down
a step towards the golden sun
a new light to brighten the day
and banish the old one from sight

a warm smile across my face
a humble begining
a commendable way
to illuminate a fresh day

with hope in sight
the mountain only gets taller
each footprint embellished in the ground
makes one more reason to stay



so yeah i tried to commit suicide a year ago today Jan 14, and since im only 16 I find it a lot to comprehend. i gone through so much in the past year im surprised im sitting here at this computer drug and cut free. I started this yeah i know not that good but yeah i intend on actually finishing it when more comes to mind.

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Copyright 2004 finaldestiny
Published on Wednesday, January 14, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: the poem portrays a sort of " im moving on" feeling, its nice. i do plan on reading more in the future:)

  • A former member wrote: That must be such a hard time to pass the anniversary of. I really feel for you. This is such a beautiful poem, like the light at the end of a long dark tunnel. I'm so impressed, it must take courage. Good luck, my dear. : ) ~Wish Upon A Star

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