Comments by All Members
- "wow amazing...XD great minds really do think alike...i love it....very compelling read. u have a way of spinning a tale into a poem, very original writing :D"
Posted by Unknown on "Ahab And Jezebel" by Malcholm Dark
- "wow...just wow :)...this really gets the mind working...its horrible to see these things in society, good point, what are the innocent to society?...the repetition almost makes it feel like its beating inside you...this really hits home. "
Posted by Unknown on "Flowers And Whores" by Malcholm Dark
- "haha.... the ancient and the ageless.... the survivors, no doubt.... until the red giant consumes them, perhaps.... an enjoyable read with the surprise ending..... never thought of roaches as war mongers ... hehe... I think you missed a 'y' up there *points* kudos, and thank you."
Posted by Unknown on "The Ageless Ones" by Malcholm Dark
- "We can do so many amazing things but we can't win the war against cockroaches
I have certainly squashed a few, don't blame me.! very interesting write as usual!"
Posted by alex herewane on "The Ageless Ones" by Malcholm Dark
- "interesting take on such a highly ridiculed insect...it needs its place in the spot-light also! it can even live w/o its head...thats quite a tough creature..nice poem :D "
Posted by Unknown on "The Ageless Ones" by Malcholm Dark
- "Its like when you dont get sleep for days...voices seems distant and vision is a blur and you just dont care about anything. Nicely written:)thanks for sharing:)"
Posted by Unknown on "Edge Of Obscurity" by Malcholm Dark
- "I've probably heard every word in this piece growing up around a racist family. I never dared to speak up against them, just listen to them wallow in their spite. They were those kinds of people that felt the world owed them for existing. They did prove that racism is alive and broiling, like a dormant volcano. Write on."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Who Is A Racist" by Malcholm Dark
- "YEAH!, GOOD WRITE. I laughed my head off just like I did when I heard we all came from Africa, that must have been a set back for all the white surpremist, I bet they don't believe it, why people are so insecure in themselves that they join
together in groups and find strenght in putting someone else down I can't work out, I love challenging racists, small minded arseholes. keep up the good work. "
Posted by alex herewane on "Who Is A Racist" by Malcholm Dark
- "labels labels everywhere and not a word to speak..... nicely done.... funny how simplistically we can reduce life to slurs and gurgles..... like putting bodies into boxes..... so many ways to strive for self aggrandizement at the expense of others.... funny, though.... how words influence actions... beyond the speech act itself.... and is not preference at the root of racism..... which is worse, the unconscious racist or the blatant and proud ignorant bastard who believes .... are we not always reducing life to some word that we think gives us power over it..... just murmurs in the dark.... thanks for sharing "
Posted by Unknown on "Who Is A Racist" by Malcholm Dark
- "I kinda see an openendiness to this, is the next step the start of something new or is the next step the one that sends you into oblivian. When your hanging over the edge and it's only your finger nails holding you, well that can be a good time to start your climb back up,
I'm just raving,have a great festive season and no doudt I'll get to read and enjoy your work some more.! "
Posted by alex herewane on "Edge Of Obscurity" by Malcholm Dark
- ""where voices have become echoes" ....aye! everything tends to become background noise .... no longer does anything boast that new found glow.... your words ring true and current .... thanks for the view!"
Posted by Opklot on "Edge Of Obscurity" by Malcholm Dark
- "A familiar territory indeed, makes me picture a world painted entirely in gray. Colorless, bland, lackluster, nicely put. Exceptional as always, write on my friend."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Edge Of Obscurity" by Malcholm Dark
- "ooo wow...I think I will be laughing till sometime tonight on this one. Everytime I try to write something I just start laughing again. Great write! Thanks for sharing..."
Posted by DarkDruidess on "Trouble In Gotham" by Malcholm Dark
- "This's hella cool. Didja know the phrase mad as a hatter came about because hatters used to use mercury to make hats and a symptom of mercury poisoning is madness."
Posted by Artanis on "The Mad Hatters' Society" by Malcholm Dark
- "Amazing write:)puts you on prospective of an addict..he knows that what he is doing is wrong but he cant let go...he even sells presents to buy drugs...it makes me feel sad for him...somehow.Nobody should be sad in this time of year:) "
Posted by Unknown on "ABCs And Heroin For Christmas" by Malcholm Dark
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